Forever's End

When love suddenly ends

All good ceases and bends

The dim sorrow of hate

Will crash everything we create

Care, loyalty, trust and sometimes even hope

It will all vanish to evil’s highest scope

Slowly it happens

Vastly it deepens

Little by little hate will take over

And unconsciously we’ll walk to the end of forever.

Reviews

[Rocans]

good poem...simple but powerful

[Epoy]

1 rating hehehehehe...!
=p

[JC]

has depth and introspection, makes you think...enjoyed this.

[Levi Levin]

Excellent thoughts of reality indeed. 100/100...congrats:)

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Such a short poem but such a simple truth. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

[}Echo{]

I really like this. It was written beautifully. Amazing. :))

[Maegan]

I really enjoyed this! It was hauntingly beautiful.

[Ellen Incognito]

This is beautifully written..."And unconsciously we'll walk to the end of forever." Amazing line :)