my star

the pain of loss

When he took you

my light left with you

the world dark

and you my star

the brightest in the far

my reason to shine 

will always be mine 

Author's Note

please let me know what you think about it and what i should improve. would really appreciate it.

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I really like this. It's short and simple, but filled with a lot of emotion and very relatable. You can feel the speaker's pain of having the ground being suddenly ripped out from him. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing.