My Stupid heart

Life is made of moments , some are good, some are bad. But there must be one moment which just made your life unbearable and left terrible pain in your heart whenever you breathe it hurts. 
Most of my moments are happy.I enjoyed all my bad, god moments but one moment made my life worse than death.
I was an independent happy pretty girl. Love of my life was a guy with beautiful eyes. When i first saw him I fell in love with his big eyes. We were crazy in love. Our five years old relationship was deeper than ocean. We didn't need to say anything to express our feelings. life was beautiful ,I was living my dream.
He was saving for three years so that he could buy a home for us. Finally he made it.it was perfect small cosy flat.
We wanted a simple marriage. With white flowers our marriage hall was looking like a haven. He was looking like a prince .The way he was looking at me as if I was the prettiest girl in the world. We were enjoying each and every moments of our marriage. Finally our marriage completed. 

After marriage he was taking me to his new home. I was dying to see our new home. he was holding my hand and driving. Suddenly something hit us, car was out of control. I was looking at my prince may be for the last time ,trying to hold him ,every thing was becoming black.

when I opened my eyes was in hospital ,my mother was sitting next to me.she was smiling at me. I was feeling intolerable pain,could not move. somehow manage to ask how is he.My mother started crying loudly. my head understood what I have to go through, at that moment I could only feel my heart pounding,my legs and hands were becoming cold, still my stupid heart was praying "Please no,no,not what I am  thinking ".

Reviews

[aparna]

Thanks Swati and klep.Definitely modify

[Swati Nayak]

I enjoyed all my bad, god moments .... it is good not god, you may edit your writing .
By the way, aparna, I really appreciate your work ,your story has the gripping effect on readers .

[Klep]

This is a really sad story. If I have any suggestions in that regard, it would be to flesh it out a bit more. More details in between the marriage and the accident I feel would make the tragedy more effective. Also, there are a lot of grammatical errors and typos here, so definitely work on that.