Is this the future

Is this the future

A Poem by Amila Jay
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a poem i wrote in 2010

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The latest trends of 2010
Is flushing new borns
down dirty drains
Say "to my son with love your mother"
And shove them into rivers
In their sleep to sleep forever
Mother's who filled their hands
With this sin
Why did you bore them into this world
If they are not allowed to breath
But don't say you were helpless
And wipe your crime on their face
And how do you yourself sleep?
With the help of a pill?

© 2012 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
this a poem that I wrote in 2010 regarding all these cases where mothers dumped new borns and kids like dirt when they couldn't bear them anymore. Your comments are appreciated :)

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It happen in all places. In the USA we have places where woman can take babies they do not want. Still they put them in trashcans and leave them to died in parks. I don't understand it. Always someone that will give love to a child. People who murder their babies will pay i believe for their deeds. A powerful and sad poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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poem is really good, theme is excellent and harsh, but i loved it its direct

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I despise women like that! There are many women who would love to have children and those "women" are just throwing their kids away. Nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is direct and hard-hitting... Its a sad but a reality that is happening everyday, every corner of the world...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's horrible how so many people do that and you captured the topic very well in your poem keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Infanticide - I am strictly against! appreciate your work

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very sad!!! Very real, cleverly written! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sad poem. It makes no sense..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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It's rather shocking how some people still commit such a crime. Life is precious, the child deserves love. Thank you for bringing awareness to such shameful atrocities.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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a great way to picture a sad reality..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a sad situation it is... and the excuses they give are unforgivable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 1, 2012
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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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