My Heart Is Cornered

I am almost here but you were never there

I can cry a river but will that make you care

Rain drops freeze my lips from saying

How much I loved you when everyone dared

Falling amongst the sound of your words

That pours as tears down my cheeks

My heart is but a mirror of broken dreams

As I dug my trench to bleed

I am nothing more inside

My heart is cornering away from me

 

Author's Note

Just thoughts flashing by ...Thanks to all those who read and review :)

Reviews

[reflectingus]

So emotional, and thoughtful, I can't help but admire the intensity with which you wrote this poem. Every word has been beautifully written, and seems like it has been hand-picked, chosen carefully, and this shows exactly the fragility of the heart, and how we bleed love and suffer from ignorance as it goes "Falling amongst the sound of your words that pours as tears down my cheeks". This is so beautifully written, I really enjoyed. However, heartbreak is just a phase of life, we all get over it, and eventually, life mends it. :)

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

Very good read. I enjoyed the imagery in this. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

[M Garcia]

The size makes it a little hard to read, but that could be my glasses. Overall, I like it. Keep it up.

[Lovely Lady]

Bravo... encore!~
~lovey lady

[MOON]

Beautiful flow , emotional write.

[Ruth]

Very emotive love...the heart is something not easy to purge! So complex and yet sometimes it really is simple, write what you feel :) Beautiful xoxo

[Elaenor Aisling]

Nice vivid imagery. Good write!

[White Ink]

"My heart is but a mirror of broken dreams
As I dug my trench to bleed
I am nothing more inside
My heart is cornering away from me"

Awww.. Beauty in words.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done, wonderfully written write!

[Reaper]

the font is really nice and adds to the poem. the emotions are greatly expressed in it.