Write About What???

Write About What???

A Poem by Amila Jay
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Nothing Serious, Just Fun!!

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Write about what to what

I thought again and again

What should I write?

What do you want me to write?

What about what?

A handful of junk

A memory to suicide

Or a body to be mesmerized

What about what?

I haven’t got a clue

Now tell me one thing or two

© 2012 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
I'll regard this as a nuisance poem, something I wrote long time back and just thought I'd post it up here, thanks to all those who read and review:-)

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Hahahha I love this. I can totally relate (as you may have noticed :P). This is actually kind of catchy, love the repetition "what about what" haha, I love the play of words there. Sometimes, I just get bored and get a really bad writers block, so I just write down what I'm thinking, and it may be totally random, but that's what makes poetry so interesting, and at the end of the day, that simple thing you wrote at that moment, would turn out to be amazing and one of your greatest inspirations for future writes. And it's fun to look at, later. Haha, great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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We all seem to have this thought run through our minds from time to time. Nice, fun write. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahahha I love this. I can totally relate (as you may have noticed :P). This is actually kind of catchy, love the repetition "what about what" haha, I love the play of words there. Sometimes, I just get bored and get a really bad writers block, so I just write down what I'm thinking, and it may be totally random, but that's what makes poetry so interesting, and at the end of the day, that simple thing you wrote at that moment, would turn out to be amazing and one of your greatest inspirations for future writes. And it's fun to look at, later. Haha, great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this puts a smile on my face. i am in the middle of the worst writer's block ever, it's driving me crazy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so clever, when you have writer's block, write about writer's block! genius! and it is well written too for someone professing a block. Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sounds like a writer who either got a difficult topic or has writers block!

We can all definately relate :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Writing when forced can lead us to crazy places. I try to write when I have the desire. A very interesting poem. I like the flow of words and question. A excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem, and a situation well known to all of us as we struggle to produce good literature.Like the use of mesmerized (Just for the record, a verb based on a real name).Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Writers block: Solution. When you dont know what to write... blow something up, throw in a wise crack, make a dirty joke,, throw a punch and shoot the place to hell and back...Well it works for me. But for you... You turn writers block into a sensational poem. I know where the skill lies, and it's with you

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hhhmmmm.... Im getting a feeling of writers block from this piece.... everytime I fall down with it I start to mumble like this.... and sometimes I write it down because look what happenes, you come up with a GREAT piece just because!!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I feel this almost everyday :) nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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