Changing

A Poem by Amila Jay

05/10/11

Midnight and I’m roaming the streets alone

Thinking to myself

Where did I go wrong?

I have had many a time

Where I have felt like that

But today it’s different

Today it’s not the same

It’s driving me insane

© 2011 Amila Jay

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Robbie~xoxo~

A stroll at midnight is a great time for free thinking... you really get a chance to connect with yourself! Nice write!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...	Very nicely done, I enjoyed the imagery. Posted 13 Years Ago Very nicely done, I enjoyed the imagery. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

A strong poem. When roaming a bad area. You must stay alert and sometime fear can overtake us. I like this poem. Short and to the point. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J Todd Underhill

Not too uncommon, I wander the streets at midnight as well, and ponder things, so this poem really found a spot with me.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 5, 2011
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Author

Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka

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Hello everyone, My name is Amila and I'm 22. I love listening to music, taking down lyrics, doing research, writing, playing video games, watching movies, etc... - Myspace Layouts,Graphics, and C.. more..