Cry me a river

cry me a river
my poor soul to shiver
against the burns
that ravished
in my eyes
stuck like wound
in my heart
a piece of memory
in the past
relive it a thousand times
to tear my flesh apart
this soul is ripped
this soul is sin
this soul not knows the fearful rims

Author's Note

Lemme know your views....thanks:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe sin is just lessons for us to be better. Few people can live a life without hurting or hurting others. Real sin is repeating the pain and damage again. The poem is strong. Type of poem that open the doors to conversation. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

conscience is a bold enemy it can lead to guilt I hope that you are not feeling that

[LadyInCrimson]

like your work Amila.. :)

[Jack Isaac]

very artful in several ways --not you, because you are the artist --but that thing which inspired this poem is artful. This thing may be "evil" but in an innocent way, like a child at the age of 2. Like a spirit yearning to be better but can't figure out how. Then I could say this only so many ways but you say it best. You say it Right On!
Also, nice structure and layout of words--It paints a picture that I may have seen once in a dream. :)

[Daytonight]

A strong and powerful write. Well done! Keep up the good work!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is NICE!! I love the flow of this poem! The "sin" in this-seems to be, that it doesn't know the havoc it has caused on the heart.-"stuck like a wound in my heart."- "to tear my flesh apart" Great write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Raw with pain and emotion that the reader can experience while reading!

Strong and Excellent written. I can feel the pain within ~ Keep on writing!

[Eric Cox]

Excellent. Strong imagery penned. Nicely done.

[KAREN]

Heartfelt and full of paina nd emotion. Nicely penned!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Fantastic writing.....I can feel the emotion here