Cry me a river

cry me a river
my poor soul to shiver
against the burns
that ravished
in my eyes
stuck like wound
in my heart
a piece of memory
in the past
relive it a thousand times
to tear my flesh apart
this soul is ripped
this soul is sin
this soul not knows the fearful rims

Author's Note

Lemme know your views....thanks:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe sin is just lessons for us to be better. Few people can live a life without hurting or hurting others. Real sin is repeating the pain and damage again. The poem is strong. Type of poem that open the doors to conversation. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sourav]

Keep up the good writing... Well written!

[Chris Yip]

Short and powerful poem about a bad memory. Yes everyone will carry a sad or bad scar from their past. Very raw and realistic write. Well done.

[Liza]

profound the representation of tears you have expressed here - it is the need to see the transparency of need in recognition that your heart has an affect or effect on another...

[Luke Ritta]

very good poem...keep up the good writing
:)

[AK]

Awesome poem!

[Muse]

I agree with Coyote...there's a lesson to be learned with your words.

This soul is ripped!
this soul is sin!
Riveting!

[V]

I like your word choice and the way you structured it. good flow. :)

[Sahar moonlight]

so stonge and powerful poem. I feeel the feelings showing out from the words

[Cassie Fraga]

oooooohhh... very deep... yes I agree with Coyote!!
you have a great way with words my friend this piece is def. going into my fav. pile!!
thank you for sharing!!
**write... write on!!**