Cry me a river

cry me a river
my poor soul to shiver
against the burns
that ravished
in my eyes
stuck like wound
in my heart
a piece of memory
in the past
relive it a thousand times
to tear my flesh apart
this soul is ripped
this soul is sin
this soul not knows the fearful rims

Author's Note

Lemme know your views....thanks:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe sin is just lessons for us to be better. Few people can live a life without hurting or hurting others. Real sin is repeating the pain and damage again. The poem is strong. Type of poem that open the doors to conversation. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Manpreet]

Beautiful write!

[kingblaq]

Strong bit. i love it

[Winter]

Use every bad and good moments in life as lessons, life is learning. Good Piece.

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow, this was very good. I love it. I like the message in this piece. =)
Imagery is great and the emotions is well done.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a beautiful piece. I really loved the message within this. I loved the emotions within this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Wow.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The battle for one's inner self is always compelling reading.
This is stunning work. I still have goosebumps.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well, I agree as a poem, it works wutie well, I netiher believe that sin exists, and our souls, are immortal, so why ahve something that can destroy it, when it's ot possible, but a good read non the less.

[An owl on the moon]

The rhythm and flow just lends itself perfectly to the mood of your words... that painful darkness that sweeps over us as the world grows cold in our undone state... Powerful.