Time is precious

something that popped into my mind about time

The sun burns away the time,
the time that ticks away at the second,
the second that makes us think about the minute,
the minute that we wasted,
and you will say,
just a minute ago I was doing this,
and the next minute wont tell you,
and any minute will take your life away.

Author's Note

Lemme know your views...thanks:)

Reviews

[ShameemAkhtar]

very graceful juxtaposition... I like how you string the sentences and with the sentenses, the words and the meaning...

just the font size I do not like, but now that i think of it, you could have used the font/size to further emphasize on this 'eating away' of time...

Lovely

[Daytonight]

I enjoyed this. Well done.

[V. K. Harris]

Every minute effects the next and soon you have an hour and a day and so on and before you know it, you wish you could just go back and change that one second that caused all this... Excellent write my new friend...

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I like it. It really gets through the fact that time is such a fast, ongoing, never-to-be-gotten-back thing. It's hard to explain, but I like it. :-)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful imagination good grace feel.....

[Thea]

Short but yeah, that was great! :)))
Time is such an important thing...So, treasure it... :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Time is our most valuable thing we control. Best not to waste time on useless things. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Excellent!
Its very nice writing.
I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Lucky!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Excellent!
Its very nice writing.
I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Lucky!

[Dark Beauty]

Great write although the font size is too big other than that Nice job!!

[joshua deathdealer]

I like how I can feel the intensity of time slipping away in this one. The large font adds to that. Well done..xx