The Spider

The Spider

A Poem by Amila Jay
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Silent Creeper

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Silent creeper
With thin legs
Came down
In the invisibility
Of a thread
Eyed all corners
And built a web
Smooth and royal
Like a bed
And waited for his guest
A little black ant
Who walked right into his trap

© 2011 Amila Jay


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Amila Jay
As always..lemme know your views..thanks:)

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Very unique...Though I hate spiders, this is really nice... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this format..even the rhyme works....nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem. I like the spiders. Wasn't for spiders. The bugs would take over the world. The spider need to be treated as a friend. I like the description and the story in the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 15, 2011
Last Updated on December 13, 2011
Tags: nature, insects, spiders, teens, fantasy, life

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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