LIFE

24/07/12

When the world has lost its glory

The eyes of truth are blind

The seed of a lie will spread its roots

And soar its wings high

Throw down the fierce spears

Of death and gory

To face a battle called life

Author's Note

Just words that flow into my mind .... your comments are appreciated :))

Reviews

[reflectingus]

Oh. My. God.
This is absolutely stunning. Loved the wise words, the truth about life, worded with such powerful thoughts. I enjoyed the way you brought reference to nature, the metaphors were amazing, and this just flowed with that inherent brilliance of rhythm and voice that your poems exhibit.

[Amila Jay]

Glad you liked it .. Thanks a bunch =)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, life is a great surprise and pain at times, well done, good read.

[Tate Morgan]

Life beats a path to our door we are left no choice but to ace itf

[The Watcher]

This is really strong, and I can sense the intensity behind your words. Life is very tough, but we just have to push on through it. Anyways, this is very well written, I like it. Kudos to you

[Amila Jay]

Thanks for the review :))

[The Watcher]

You're welcome Amila =)

[Rhea752]

the 4th line the word gory doesn't really work since your using an adjective in the place of a noun. other than that i really do enjoy this poem it has power. good job.

[Amila Jay]

Thanks for that. Well that word kind of seemed to go along with the poem . but anyway .. thanks for the review :))