Rain Drops

The sky has opened wide on the world below

It creates puddles as it drenches the ground

They’re playing a beautiful song as they drop

Its words draw me in and make me listen

 

They keep playing with all my emotions

Rain drops start to fall from my eyes

The pace of mine match those from the sky

Calling me to join them outside

 

I need you but you’re nowhere to be found

I give in and go sit on the ground

The droplets make a blanket around me

Where are you when I really need you

 

The energy is quickly draining from me

I start getting tired and lay down

Tears from the sky continue to play

 

My eye lids slowly begin to close

My body starts to relax and calm down

My mind begins to slow down and turn off

I can’t feel the blanket around me anymore

I can’t hear the song being sung

 

I have no idea where I am

I see you sitting next to me why

Why do you look so sad and hurt

My mind starts to race everywhere

 

There are little wet patches on your clothes

What is going on right now

Finally the things I remember rush back in

I remember falling asleep under the wide open sky

 

I stop and listen to you speaking to me

I hear you saying that you should have never left

You keep saying you’re sorry over and over

Small drops fall from your face as I get pulled away

The last thing I heard was…… I love you

Reviews

[al25]

Wow. Very well written. Havent read your writing in a while. Really enjoyed reading this :)

[Morning Star]

eloquently written and express thoughts
Within your words i feel pain and a few regrets
and alot of sadness but hopeful and finally
Love,I find this peace to have been written with
The quill of life!
Very Deep write
Outstanding poetic piece

[Omegax45]

Wow. Just...wow. And I don't really read poetry that much. This is one of the best I've read so far.

[x]

very sweet writing here

[Rossen]

Your sending quivers through this damp blanket
you left over me.

[Adam :P]

well written good. i liked it.

[cfix]

very thought provoking and very well written. Enjoyable read

[LonelySoul]

hmmmmmmmm...very thought provoking work here,Thanx for sharing...LonelySoul

[Liza]

smooth expression
of reflection and sadness and longing
yet expressing gratitude of one that loved
somehow gone in presence
but lives in the heart

[Chamil3001]

great poem..

i like how you end the poem