He Is

He is gentle and sweet

He wonders if he’s good enough

He hears the pain of the ones he cares about

He sees the dreams he once dreamt

He wants the life he has had to work for

He is gentle and sweet

 

He pretends he’s a ninja

He feels the happiness and freedom in writing

He touches the tears in the sky

He’s worries about the only people he has left in his life

He cries when he thinks about losing her

He is gentle and sweet

 

He understand he can’t save everyone

He says that love can change a person

He dreams about being with her forever

He tries to let go of the pain he’s experienced

He hopes to have a good life

He is gentle and sweet

Reviews

[x]

wow, so perfect

[Crinkle°]

still beautiful.... very moving.

[sammyj]

wow i like this

[Brittany W]

beautifully written, it was consistant, i really enjoyed this.

[Crowley]

That's a good man. If I can teach my son sensitivity.....than I have done my job. The line about the ninja is fabby...I loved it.

[Michael X]

Really smooth poem, I see a consistancy in the flow, which works.
I found the meaning to be heartfelt and endearing, great job here

[.]

a heartfelt and uplifting poem..well penned

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Soooo beautiful. Bravo, my friend.

[Dark Lady Phoenix]

awww I love it! Good job!

[Immortal1967]

like the layout of this and the flow...good job on this