Hey You

Hey you, my pretty baby

You are the most beautiful girl

I've ever seen

walking down the earth

cuz,

You look perfect 

from head to toe.

You are kinda girl,

i've been searching for.

I tell ya,

I ain't never had nobody,

I felt this way

about.

You are a stunner,

you are my cindrella

I'll sing you 

a song

(and it sounds like)

when i look into 

deep of your eyes,

( i can see ) 

I can see a world of paradise

You give me such a comfort,

you fill me with delight.

Pretty girl,

you amuse me with your company

you make me feel so high.

Every moment i spend with you

feels like a stellar joyride.

I'mma touch the sky. ........

Author's Note

Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

You could definitely sing this one my friend... very good work :)

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
Could feel the love in this very sweet piece:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Yes, it does flow very much like a song. Well done. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"You give me such a comfort,
you fill me with delight.

I'mma touch the sky. ........"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[R Smith]

yep it does sound like a song, lyric writing is an art that can be hard to master, well done :)

[wordman]

it will be a number one hit