Hey You

Hey you, my pretty baby

You are the most beautiful girl

I've ever seen

walking down the earth

cuz,

You look perfect 

from head to toe.

You are kinda girl,

i've been searching for.

I tell ya,

I ain't never had nobody,

I felt this way

about.

You are a stunner,

you are my cindrella

I'll sing you 

a song

(and it sounds like)

when i look into 

deep of your eyes,

( i can see ) 

I can see a world of paradise

You give me such a comfort,

you fill me with delight.

Pretty girl,

you amuse me with your company

you make me feel so high.

Every moment i spend with you

feels like a stellar joyride.

I'mma touch the sky. ........

Author's Note

Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Nicely done piece to your love. It has some rough spots, but the message is clear.

[V]

This really reads like lyrics. Nice, contemporary write.

[-inactive now-]

Mate, if I could sing I would totally sing this song to my Missus. :) Well done

[zunie frost]

This is so cute ! I love the way your wrote a song for that girl !! Perfect write with well chosen words !

[Great Aunt Astri]

What an insight into a young man's feelings for the one he loves! Well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is good to remind the other just how important he or she is in our lives...sometimes just a look or a touch is enough, but sometimes the words need to be heard.

[Urja Gokani]

good poem great job !!!!!

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep it up!

[Emily]

A very cute piece, armin!

[andrew mitchell]

very strong feelings which although true in feeling would scare any girl lol One has to be subtle first then when you have her, pour on the love for a lifetime!