Just give me a word

Just give me a word

A Poem by armin
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Tell me something
break your silence,
make it clear
Do you love me or not?

I want to hear your
sweet whispers in my ear
Don't let it disappear
Do you love me or not?

If your silence means no,
I will melt like the snow
But will find a way to let go
Do you love me or not?
But if your silence means yes,
run fast to my chest,
the restless racing heart of love's quest
Do you love me or not?

I can't read your mind
And I feel lost and blind
Please give a small sign
Do you love me or not?
No, (Please?) don't go astray,
Don't ever be a slave
to unsure feelings
Just tell me straight
if you love me girl,

Tell me something,
break your silence
Just give me a word
Do you love me or not?



© 2015 armin


Author's Note

armin
Thankyou so much for reading.

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Very good use of thoughts and words. I liked how you led to the very good ending.
"Tell me something,
break your silence
Just give me a word
Do you love me or not?"
Sometime words can have great value. Some words can make us live or die. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


a question we all need an answer to, for you Armin i would say this is a superb lyric should you be putting it to music, very well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The best feeling in the world is when the person one loves, returns the same.. The lyrical way of your writing is amazing.... Beautiful:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


For some, actions speak louder than words, but I believe we all want to hear those three sweet words. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well written and delivered!
The repetition is really good in this piece,
and the sincerity of the chosen words makes
the feeling come alive, I could definitely feel the
emotions:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice flow to this, Armin... and the repetition emphasizes you aren't looking for appeasement, you simply want to know... yes or no! Enjoyed this... well-done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice wording!
I liked it!
Well done!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sometimes we just need that word...no matter what the signals....confirmation is needed....

nicely expressed.

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


the most asked question in the world my friend and you captured it on canvas

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 9, 2015
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Tags: Silence, hear, mind, slave, straight, love

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armin
armin

New Delhi, Delhi, India



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