I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE - A SONG

I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE - A SONG

A Poem by armin
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An improved version of my song I'll walk again. I've totally manipulated it.

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I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE

1st verse. ..

I never thought this would be that hard,
to erase you outta my mind.
It sucks without you babe,
it's draining away my life.
I am breathless so faithless,
I am down against the wall.
Trapped in misery,
I feel so small.

Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I won't believe it's over
I need you by my side.

Chorus. ...

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
I need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunted sleep,
save me before I die
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side.

2nd verse. ..

Do you remember the first time,
I held you in my hands.
It was a full moon night,
our first kiss, first dance.
And see we were going so perfect,
our love was taking a strong stance.
It could' ve never been ended this way,
if we would' ve given it one more chance.

Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I won't believe it's over
I need you by my side.

Chorus. ..

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over
i need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunting dream,
save me before i die.
I need you so badly
I need you by my side.

3rd Verse. ..

Girl,
When you left me in middle of the street,
I cried a river of tears.
My world came crashing down,
I was full of fear.
Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I love you so much,
and I need you by my side.

Chorus. ..

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
I need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunting dream,
save me before i die.
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side.


Copyright 2015
Written by Armin







© 2015 armin


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armin
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Admin, you are so passionate about your song lyrics. I can't wait to hear music to these!!
Wonderful work as always.

Posted 10 Years Ago


armin

10 Years Ago

Welcome back Ana, thankyou for your kind words dear. I missed you and your writings a lot.
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Thank you armin! :)
Armin: I can tell you put some time into this writing and it shows: I love it all....the chorus is my favorite but the 3rd vs/bridge great as well...I can already hear music when I say it aloud....Fantastic work...truly wonderful....Thank you so much! Dale
Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
i need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunted sleep,
save me before I die
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side...

Posted 10 Years Ago


armin

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Dale, but about music you know i am studying a lot of courses including C.A which is the mo.. read more
Confuser

10 Years Ago

That is so wonderful...I cannot wait to here it someday!!! Lastly: I love Counting Crows...no need.. read more
just needs the music, its gotta be a success, i always like a song with plenty of verses and the chorus is good, well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This does seem like it would make a good song. All good songs begin with a good poem! ~Sharon

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hope you'll set it to music and include a recording with your post

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful song ... Enjoyed it ..
_Beyourself

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very very good, would love to hear the song

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is top 40 hit song, and I want to hear the music that goes with these lyrics :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Hi armin. You have the makings of a great song here, but I feel it needs more work, a little more refinement, a little more passion. If you are mourning the loss of a partner, you need to have more heartache exposed in the words. I'd love to look at this again when you have added to the underlying emotion, alf

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful song, Armin. thanks for sharing :) Rudi

Posted 10 Years Ago



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