Supergirl

A love poem.

SUPERGIRL ....

People play the games of hearts, do
thousand tricks to flirt.
Make fake love then separate,
excuse 'now it's enough'.
But i don't want this all,
a one night stand isn't what
i am looking for.

I wanna be part of your world,
the peace of your heart.
You're my light i am the sun, girl
you're my only one.
I don't care how you look,
i don't care what you talk.
I just want your company forever,
i just wanna be yours.

And when you are in front of me,
my feelings come out naturally.
Girl, when i get you closer,
you act on me, supernaturally.

You are my Supergirl,
matchless in whole universe.
Spark flashes from your eyes,
you're a girl so fine.
And every second of time i am
thinking of you
Mad-e-ly i am falling in love
with you, my Supergirl.

Author's Note

Thankyou so much for your read, suggestions if any?

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Capitalize Supergirl. It will give your poem definition, this is your title and how you're describing your woman.
I love the passion of this poem great write

[armin]

It's done. Thanks annalysiar for your great reviews , I appreciate it very much.

[annalysiar]

You are more than welcome I sometimes think my reviews aren't so good but I try, thank you

[Tks]

Armin, your words echo deeply your sentiments, and how you wish to find your supergirl so as to share this wonderful, passionate love that you have with her.
A great read, a passionate poem indeed. Well done!

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[Elie Marie]

"I wanna be part of your world,
the peace of your heart."
I love this.

[R Smith]

lovely dedication to your Supergirl, may you continue forever Armin :)

[Ana B.]

sighing with this super dose of romance.....lucky supergirl...

[alf]

Hi armin. I have found the emotion in this piece. It kind of oozes from the words but its more like an undercurrent that just flows through the lines. Love this alf

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

lovely.... good one!!
felt it!!!

[Jimmy Yetts]

A heartfelt, most ardent ode.
Well done!--superboy.

[MomzillaNC]

Everyone's looking for that one forever someone. It's indescribable to find them. Ahh… but that's the poet's endless inspiration.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Love is essential in our life, without it, we are meaningless. Well done. :) Rudi