You

A love poem.

Feeling deep inside,
i am feeling something high.
Although doors of my heart locked,
but you came in, passed by
like an arrow through my heart.

Oh! i try take this feeling out,
but it comes back in round.
I am driven away by your sight,
always in back of my mind.

I can breathe through blowing wind,
i can hear you from across the sky.
Clouds shower your love with rain,
i am bathing under wearing wide smiles.
Writing your name in mist soil,
i can smell the scent of your skin.
Shimmering sea reflects your glowing face,
you are everywhere and in everything.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words for love.
"Writing your name in mist soil,
i can smell the scent of your skin.
Shimmering sea reflects your glowing face,
you are everywhere and in everything."
You create good vision and good place in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

sounds like cupid,has drawn back her bow

[Elie Marie]

did you mean breathe?
I like this. Well done!

[armin]

Oh ya, I'll fix that spell. Thankyou.

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write! Very sweet and message crystal clear, bit by the love
bug, lol! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

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I can breathe you through blowing wind
I can hear you from across the sky
clouds shower your love with rain... That was absolutely my favorite part. Breathless!

[stars are far]

That was very beautiful work , keep it up :)

[Deepika]

She entered into the speaker's life piercing as an arrow, finding a place for herself in the heart that was unwelcome to any feelings. And now the speaker senses her in every bit of his actions & every nook and corner.
Beautiful write :)

[ANTO]

This is my favourite of yours Armin. The speaker truly has the 'love bug' - unable to put the images and thoughts of the object of their affection to the back of their mind for too long before it bungees - some would consider, beautifully, back into the minds eye. This may be a pleasant or bittersweet experience; depending on the status of the relationship when it occurs.
This resonates deeply with me.
Thank you for the RR :)

[Saddam]

I can breath you through blowing wind,
I can hear you from across the sky.
Clouds shower your love with rain,

Beautiful write dear friend.....
I love it.

[nazia]

so lost in love that you can feel her essence in every tiny bit.. very well expressed