You

A love poem.

Feeling deep inside,
i am feeling something high.
Although doors of my heart locked,
but you came in, passed by
like an arrow through my heart.

Oh! i try take this feeling out,
but it comes back in round.
I am driven away by your sight,
always in back of my mind.

I can breathe through blowing wind,
i can hear you from across the sky.
Clouds shower your love with rain,
i am bathing under wearing wide smiles.
Writing your name in mist soil,
i can smell the scent of your skin.
Shimmering sea reflects your glowing face,
you are everywhere and in everything.

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Wow gripping and raw. With a message so true.

[andrew mitchell]

Isn't it a great feeling! Love. Nice write

[B]

For some reason all the poetry today is of love
but this one is unique

seems like you touched everything in these words

this is lovely

[Dr. Wood ?]

sounds like LOVE.................

[sereenaoutloud]

lovely with beautiful imagery!

[Lavender Soya]

Wonderful write. The emotions in this composition are quite palpable. Moreover, I love the array of figures of speech. You surely know how to make all the elements agree with each other naturally. Keep writing!

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

hey.. so sweet n cute...
lovely work...

[Terrence Chang]

Great writing Armin. Keep posting

[Anamika:-Search for a n..]

that's what called soul relation no other contact needed ...nature gives us the power to be in contact with our soul counterpart

[MsJewel]

Beautifully soft and romantic and the images you have created are lovely.
A gorgeous love poem.

:) Julie