Blessed son

this one is dedicated to all the mothers.

Once she was a girl,
a crazy little girl.
Her hairs tied with rubber bands
teddies, chocolates were her best friends.
Her face looked so innocent,
she taught us to smile.
As she grew older,
shined with glory and pride.

Now she is a great woman,
more caring, loving and beautiful.
I am the blessed son of that Goddess,
and she is my respected mother.
Greedless her sheltered love,
builds me strong, stronger than ever.
To race with the pace of life,
she strengthens me, fuels the power.

Her contributions to my successes,
can not be told in words.
All I can say is 'a big thank you',
from the core of my heart.
Whatever she expects from me,
I'll make her dreams come true.
I know she loves me a lot,
with respects I love her much too.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

It's a nice story about all women out there from little girls, to young ladies, to dignified women they become. They are monuments to put on pedestals, because they have achieved so much just by loving us unconditionally and teaching us the right values.

[Peter Rogerson]

My own mother died in the 1960s and somehow a great deal of the women she was has faded ... I would have loved to meet the child she had been in the 20s, teenager with all those hopes. I like your poem

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely expressed write on your mum and mums. Very touching write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a beautiful tribute to your mother...where would we be without them?
we would not exist. and once we do exist, we would not sustain life without them.

[B]

This love here is like a beautiful picture
a painting of devotion

i cant say much
this is something to felt rather than said
Totally gorgeous that you managed to put it in words

[Ashley Dawn Proctor]

This is an amazing job. Love the poem.

[nazia]

Beautiful. Its always good to respect the sacrifices mothers do for us.. The write is extremely fluid, caught my attention right from the first line. :)
Well written..

[AaronFreitas]

What a nice piece! I really enjoyed it and it had a great flow to it. Only correction would be add the s on to strengthen... she strengthens me me, fuels the power. Good work

[R Smith]

nice tribute to your Mother, a really special write :)

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What a beautiful out pour of love and gratitude!

[armin]

thankyou so much for a good review.