Beautiful valentine

A short love poem.

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I can't give you diamonds,
I can't load you with gold.
I just have a pure loving heart,
that's all I have for yours.
I can't buy you those fancy things,
can't ride you in luxury cars.
World seems blissful as light breeze,
when you lie down in my arms.

I won't ever commit fake,
I can never lie with shadow of mine.
I'll always stand by you as original,
you are the best part of my life.
Feel the passion of my heart,
see the stars in my eyes.
They blink watching your face,
twinkle softly when you smile.

Believe, hold my hand
let's escape out of this suffocated world.
Someplace where angels live,
sing love, love and love.
Dancing on top of the earth,
passion will rule over our minds.
I wish the time would stop here,
I thank you for being my beautiful valentine.

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Author's Note

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Just began: First stanza: KILLER!!! World seems blissful as light breeze, when you lie down in my arms (fav line so far).
Believe, hold my hand
let's escape out of this suffocated world.
Someplace where angels live,
sing love, love and love. > Beautiful and love the last stanza too....this is a journey any girl would want. Well written! I love it! Thank you so much. Dale

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

This is a sweet, loving and romantic write! A valentine pledge of truth and love.

With respect and smiles,
Carol phelan Aebby

[wordman]

well my friend I think it`s a beautiful valentine poem for your lady

[Roshan Nair]

Humility, committment and the dream. This ones a perfect love poem armin. Great work! liked your flow again, fluid as ever

[Valentine]

This reminds me of the old song, " All I Have To Offer You Is Me' sung by Charlie Pride. For many of us, that is enough. Valentine

[TheLostMind]

A really good write Spidey!. Diamonds, luxury cars , gold etc can all be measured, they can be sold, they can be "bought". But love, love is eternal, it can't be bought. It comes from within our hearts. :)

[~]

A heartfelt poem for your Valentine. Well done!! :)

[Chris]

I hope you have THAT someone to give this poem to.

[Jamestown]

You did a great job on this piece, I enjoyed reading top to bottom, thanks for sharing!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was beautiful, so sweet and romantic.
I felt the passion and love in this piece.
I like at the start how you were saying how in love you where with this woman, but you can't give her the world, though hoping she only needs you. A true woman doesn't care about all these things, and just wants her man.
I like the frowning faces at the start, then the happy ones at the end :)