Beautiful valentine

A short love poem.

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I can't give you diamonds,
I can't load you with gold.
I just have a pure loving heart,
that's all I have for yours.
I can't buy you those fancy things,
can't ride you in luxury cars.
World seems blissful as light breeze,
when you lie down in my arms.

I won't ever commit fake,
I can never lie with shadow of mine.
I'll always stand by you as original,
you are the best part of my life.
Feel the passion of my heart,
see the stars in my eyes.
They blink watching your face,
twinkle softly when you smile.

Believe, hold my hand
let's escape out of this suffocated world.
Someplace where angels live,
sing love, love and love.
Dancing on top of the earth,
passion will rule over our minds.
I wish the time would stop here,
I thank you for being my beautiful valentine.

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Author's Note

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Just began: First stanza: KILLER!!! World seems blissful as light breeze, when you lie down in my arms (fav line so far).
Believe, hold my hand
let's escape out of this suffocated world.
Someplace where angels live,
sing love, love and love. > Beautiful and love the last stanza too....this is a journey any girl would want. Well written! I love it! Thank you so much. Dale

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

as the title states .. BEAUTIFUL....
a lovely poem for the one whom you love...
truly amazing....

[jo]

Its very beautiful something I would want to hear from someone its true honesty:)
Jo.

[Deepika]

Very beautifully written! I enjoyed reading it:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sensitive journey in your words.
"Believe, hold my hand
let's escape out of this suffocated world.
Someplace where angels live,
sing love, love and love. "
The above lines would be a good place to land and be. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the day of love.
Coyote

[R Smith]

very good Valentine day poem Spidey, paints a picture of passion and the desire to make it a special day, well written :)

[Lavender Soya]

Hello Spidey,

I enjoyed your poem. Your honesty blended well with passion. Furthermore i can sense your love for your lady. Bravo! Continue writing!

All the best,
Lavender Soya

[Emily]

Great poem for Valentines day!
Well done!!

[MomzillaNC]

Very touching & sweet :)

[Ana B.]

oh, what and adorable, sweet, sweet confession....sigh.....lovely, affectionate piece.