The show must carry on

As the title suggests, an inspirational song.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everybody has some flaws,
everybody sometimes is false.
One day always one has to loose
it doesn't mean you are not in use.
You just have to keep try & try,
maybe result you fly in sky.
If you loose yourself in the dark,
come back to rescue your smile.

Hook. ...

If you wanna be brave and free,
then everyone sing with me.
If you wanna hold your dreams forever,
shouldn't forget the success key .

Chorus. ...

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone.
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Verse 2 ...

Everyone isn't perfectly skilled,
though everyone has own speciality.
We are just handmades of the God,
bad times just test our ability.
You must stand best in every test,
life is a journey don't be obsessed.
Maybe thousand stones in the path,
keep walking on until you last.

Hook. ...

If you wanna be stout, brave and free,
put your hands up and sing with me.
If you wanna hold your dreams forever,
dear, you shouldn't forget the success key.

Chorus.....

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone .
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Rap verse (3)

Situations may be passive,
problems sometimes are massive.
Don't be scared, have to win the war,
shout out loud like Katy Perry's roar.
Look at the spiders are they,
ever tired of climbing the wall.
Storms even can't tremor you,
your eyes set on the goals.
Bring it on, bring it on
bring the battle on
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Chorus. ...

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone.
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON. ........

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright 2015
Armin (Parveen Kumar)

Author's Note

Shout out loud like Katy Perry's roar.
Well, if you don't know the line includes the name of a song (roar) by Katy Perry which is a chart topping and a very inspiring song.

Reviews

[The StoryTeller]

YOU'RE GONNA HEAR ME ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :p
Anyways, I liked it, but coming from a rapper's perspective, the rap verse is kind of short. o: But otherwise, I loved it, and could totally hear it on the radio. I think it preaches a good message. :)

[armin]

Rap verse is short but I think it fits in the song ,I also thought rap verse could be lil more extended but you know I will not consider it as a final output when I will be recording and ya for sure I will be giving the rap verse a long look. Thank you so much.

[The StoryTeller]

No problem, and if you want any help, I write songs too, and I generally rap more than I sing, so if you want to talk or want some help, I'd love to do that. You'll have to tell me once this is recorded so I can get it! And if you ever want to collaborate on something together, just let me know, whether it be through a comment on my page or an email. :)

[armin]

for sure. Thanks.

[The StoryTeller]

No problem. :P

[jacob erin-cilberto]

needs some editing, but a cool song here.

[armin]

Thank you Jacob.

[wordman]

sounds like a top ten,my friend

[armin]

Thankyou. ....

[Valentine]

I think I am a bit old for this kind of music. But I can remember a time not so long ago when I loved to dance to these tunes. Kathie

[armin]

You can still groove, heart should be young not age. Thanks for your visit.

[MomzillaNC]

Great balance and emotive imagery in these lyrics. Are you going to add original music?

[armin]

Yes Mom but these days I am concentrating more on studies. Thanks, I am glad you liked it.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Y'know, music is good for the brain and that's good for your studies. So, how can you NOT devote some time to composing original music for your lyrics? It's win-win!

[armin]

But that needs a major record deal, otherwise who will listen to the song. I have many big plans to audition in record companies but you know in india there is hardly any opportunity. Yep I can release a single by my own but that will not gain much audience. A song needs a major record label. First I want to be experienced by playing locally and when I will be mature enough I will audition for some record companies. Thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

Ummm… heard of YouTube? Bieber was discovered on YouTube

[armin]

Thanks again for your great support MZ, Youtube has less chances I believe in live show and auditions. And I think I am not too old gonna be 20 in june still have much time to groom up as a musician. There is so much left to learn. Then youtubes and recordings. I want a grand entry in music scene. Thanks again Mom I appreciate that.

[MomzillaNC]

Good luck!

[Jamestown]

Wow, I would jam this, well done. ..

[armin]

Thanks for your lovely visit.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

impressive write!!
great messages and obviously motivating.......
i liked it!!!
:)
p.s. i did feel though that grammar was compromised for rhyme at a few places. that might just only be me!!! i am not an expert. :D

[armin]

Thank you so much, I appreciate that.