The show must carry on

As the title suggests, an inspirational song.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everybody has some flaws,
everybody sometimes is false.
One day always one has to loose
it doesn't mean you are not in use.
You just have to keep try & try,
maybe result you fly in sky.
If you loose yourself in the dark,
come back to rescue your smile.

Hook. ...

If you wanna be brave and free,
then everyone sing with me.
If you wanna hold your dreams forever,
shouldn't forget the success key .

Chorus. ...

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone.
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Verse 2 ...

Everyone isn't perfectly skilled,
though everyone has own speciality.
We are just handmades of the God,
bad times just test our ability.
You must stand best in every test,
life is a journey don't be obsessed.
Maybe thousand stones in the path,
keep walking on until you last.

Hook. ...

If you wanna be stout, brave and free,
put your hands up and sing with me.
If you wanna hold your dreams forever,
dear, you shouldn't forget the success key.

Chorus.....

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone .
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Rap verse (3)

Situations may be passive,
problems sometimes are massive.
Don't be scared, have to win the war,
shout out loud like Katy Perry's roar.
Look at the spiders are they,
ever tired of climbing the wall.
Storms even can't tremor you,
your eyes set on the goals.
Bring it on, bring it on
bring the battle on
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON.

Chorus. ...

The show must carry on,
until the last breath is gone.
Never loose the faith,
just always be brave.
I know you are in trouble,
I know you've passed some hurdles.
But just one thing you must be known,
THE SHOW MUST CARRY ON. ........

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright 2015
Armin (Parveen Kumar)

Author's Note

Shout out loud like Katy Perry's roar.
Well, if you don't know the line includes the name of a song (roar) by Katy Perry which is a chart topping and a very inspiring song.

Reviews

[The StoryTeller]

YOU'RE GONNA HEAR ME ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :p
Anyways, I liked it, but coming from a rapper's perspective, the rap verse is kind of short. o: But otherwise, I loved it, and could totally hear it on the radio. I think it preaches a good message. :)

[armin]

Rap verse is short but I think it fits in the song ,I also thought rap verse could be lil more extended but you know I will not consider it as a final output when I will be recording and ya for sure I will be giving the rap verse a long look. Thank you so much.

[The StoryTeller]

No problem, and if you want any help, I write songs too, and I generally rap more than I sing, so if you want to talk or want some help, I'd love to do that. You'll have to tell me once this is recorded so I can get it! And if you ever want to collaborate on something together, just let me know, whether it be through a comment on my page or an email. :)

[armin]

for sure. Thanks.

[The StoryTeller]

No problem. :P

[Shivam Murari]

"You're gonna hear me ROAR, louder than the line"
I love how this poem fits so much into the lyrical form of poetry. I am much into lyrical form these days, due to my ever-growing interest in music. And obviously I love the message you share.

A small note here, one of the greatest Bollywood actor/director, Raj Kapoor, had used the phrase "The Show Must Go On". That is what pulled me to read this poem. Good work indeed.

[armin]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Shivam Murari]

You're welcome. :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

AWESOME DUDE!
I see lots of potential...
Look at this song one of my writers cafe friends made for me... I think you would like it a lot also...
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/CrazyWriter/1491486/#comment-3643810
Keep up the awesome work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[armin]

Thanks, I'll check it out.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words. I like words and the energy in the poem. Feel like a song and a hopeful poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

Thankyou so much John.

[armin]

Thankyou so much John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[~]

ohhh, I wonder how does this will sound when sang. If you record it, post it and send me another Read Request.

[armin]

Thankyou, for sure.

[Roshan Nair]

This is such a song man, it could really work if theres some scope to put some music into it.
I loved the flow and rhymes..plus the message is indeed inspiring.
Good work! Cheers!

[armin]

Thankyou for such an appreciation.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One to sing when your feeling a little beaten up by the world, right on, well done, good read.

[armin]

Thankyou. ...

[Emily]

Love the beginning!
Well done!!

[armin]

Thankyou. ...

[R Smith]

rousing song Armin, if ever we feel down then with some music i think you'll have an anthem to optimism, well written my friend :)

[armin]

Thank you soooo much, Richard always good to see you.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

The show must go on. Very good and very true, Armin. :) Rudi

[armin]

yes Rudi it's very true ,thanks for visiting.

[Matching Socks]

Add music, I wanna hear it!

[armin]

Wow I am really really glad you wanna hear the song. Thankyou will work on it.