Take care

A revenge song

Baibe,
you were all and all that I had.
Craize, i was
I felt the whole world in my hand.
Angel,
you uplifted my world out of earth.
Faker,
then I found that you cheated girl.
First day
you held me tight.
For a month
it was alright.
But you had plans with other guys.
Your eyes
on their status high.
I was blind in glit of view.
Round curls,
you got me hypnotised.
I was fool,
I fell in love.
Girl, why did you cheat me?
 why ???

Chorus. ....
I gave you my all, my soul,
my heart and everything that I own.
You ripped apart,
tore my heart in pieces.
Girl, you knocked me down.
Now I am feeling heartless chest,
my mind depressed.
I tighten my fist, so take a revenge.
Now,
it's time when i gave you back
with all I had.
So, take care. .......

Author's Note

Inspired by break up songs from Justin timberlake.

Reviews

[Emily]

I liked it!!
Keep it up!!

[armin]

Thank you Emily.

[...]

I envy people who can write beautiful music :)

[armin]

Ha, liked that comment you can write better than me.

[Confuser]

And I know his songs: What goes around comes to mind. Great writing Armin. Loved it; it is a beautiful song. Thank you. This is a winner!!!

[armin]

Thankyou Dale, much appreciated.

[Confuser]

Great writing; loved the song. Certain it will sound great. You are most welcome Armin.

[Elie Marie]

I like this... knowing multiple sides of this story makes me like it more.

[armin]

Thanks Elie.

[Laura Lynn]

wow, you know, writing song lyrics is harder than people think, you have to put some time into it, it's not just one, two, three and you're done, unless you're really experienced at that, even then you could have an off day, you know?

[armin]

Laura yes, you know Justin timberlake came out with the song 'cry me a river' when he experienced break up with Britney spears. Thanks my friend for your nice review.

[wordman]

it`s a number one hit on the charts

[armin]

woe, thanks ron you flattered me.

[wordman]

you are welcome my friend

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A 'revenge' song? Sometimes people are not honest. It's the sad truth. When you are deceived in love, it's very hard to live with that. Forget her, there are a lot of other girls who are really honest. :) Rudi

[armin]

Ha, rudi thanks for your nice review.

[R Smith]

good song writing Armin, you must have music for it it could be a success :)

[armin]

yes next year, I am completing my graduation so then I work on recordings. Thank you so much.

[Valentine]

Being older than you, I have not heard his song. With the fist part, do you mean his revenge will be hitting her? Valentine

[armin]

yes Kathie you got it right, you know j.t is my idol when it comes to R&B music. His music is amazing. Thanks.