Lesson

Whatever you think an inspiration, philosophy or anything else.

Darkness lights up with an ignited wishful hope,
dirt cleans out from a bubbling soap.
Love awakens with an admiring glance,
world seems beautiful feet jump into dance.

Dream is achieved with a grateful imagination,
man may be a hero when he thinks first before action.
Loneliness fills in laying head over mother's shoulder,
nothing can break you if you are strong like a soldier.

Ponder over it, its my suggestion
every line prevails a deep lesson......

Author's Note

You know we all have a bit dark side so it's just a philosophy that every problem risen in life has a solve. Whether you are trapped in dark, you have insincerities, you wanna achieve something, you are lonely or if you are weaker. So the poem is a lesson.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing wisdom in your words.
"Ponder over it, its my suggestion
every line prevails a deep lesson...... "
I agree. A wise person planned for good or bad day. To ensure success. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

John you really honour me with your great reviews, you are very kind. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

It was my luck and honor to read your work and you are welcome.

[wordman]

when man thinks first and lets god in control he can do great things
a great write a great lesson

[armin]

Thanxxiii. .

[MomzillaNC]

I like this one. It's an encouraging and wise lesson.

NOTES: Some recommendations/suggestions
"world seems beautiful feet start jumping from land." This line doesn't really sing for me; maybe something like: "The world seems beautiful as my feet jump into the dance."

For "man becomes hero when he thinks first then action." Maybe something like "A may be a hero when he thinks first before action."

[armin]

mom first you are a great editor, I liked your first suggestion I would change it.

[armin]

Thanks for your recommendations.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Glad I could help.

[Confuser]

It is both inspiring and beautiful Armin and love the way you have written and every single word. There is always a solution, ignited wishful hope, admiring glance, grateful imagination - think things through, I will try harder to comtemplate my actions with thoughts, My favorite line is Loneliness fill in laying head over mother's shoulder. I also see other perspectives, like the admiring glance; it would have so many meaning to different people depending on where they are in their life, No? Thank you.

[armin]

yes Dale you are right thanks for your kind words, my friend Joey getting better but still needs a long time bed rest. Thanks.

[Confuser]

Woe, now I feel terrible; it is alright: see I must re-read again; take my time for I have thought of the drummer, Joey; really look back, you wrote; passed, then accident, I thought he had left us. Scared me! I will pray now for Joey to recover and be patient with his healing. Everything has a way of working out - the plan is there already. Thank you for writing such beautiful words. Talented, you are, and kind, don't every forget!!!

[armin]

Oh my God, I think there might be a little communication problem. But it's alright now that you got the matter. Dale, you are kind too. Thanks.

[Confuser]

No, my young friend, everything is fine: I am so glad you love the flowers like I do; you know so much about the love of nature; we are blessed so much with our earth. It is amazing!