I'll make it Big

I'll make it Big

A Poem by armin
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A lyrics defining my dreams and my aspirations.

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Opening. .....

I am going away,
away from my sweet little home.
To a big world,
taking some rich dreams in my eyes.
The place is full of lights,
the place is paradise.
Skyscraper buildings,
kissing the great heights.

Verse1.....

I am driving down,
to the finish line of my success.
Hardwork is premium gear,
and fuel is my sweat.
I'll be there,
be there for sure.
I don't fear of the storms,
don't really care if I fall
i am gonna bounce back.

I'll look like moon,
shine like a star.
Spend weekdays in heaven,
and weekends in mars.

Yes,
I'll make it big,
apply countless efforts.
I'll live my dreams,
own a big name and treasures.

Chorus .....
I'll make it big,
bigger and large.
Keep chasing my dreams,
till my heartbeat is last.

verse2....
Honoured by Grammys,
an Oscar award.
I'll be living every second,
like a superstar.
Wake up at seven,
from a wide round bed.
Much work in studios,
yeah am a strong man.

Big line up performances,
people shout and cheer.
Tired writing autographs,
rest in a golden chamber.

Yes,
I'll make it big,
make it for sure.
Rolling in fame,
I'll open the door
to success.

Chorus. .....
I'll make it big,
bigger and large.
Keep chasing my dreams,
till heartbeat is last.

Like from slum to a heaven,
I'll make it big.
From dull to diamond,
I'll make it big.
From dark to a lighten hope,
I'll make it big.
And from down to the top,
I'll make it big.

Big Big Big,
Bigger and large.
So big big big,
MUCH BIGGER AND LARGE. ......................................

© 2016 armin


Author's Note

armin
Its inspired by Peter Gabriel song 'Big time'. Thanks Dale for reminding of the song, it was a great inspiration.

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Oh my goodness Armin, I am reading and loving it and thinking wow, how great and in the back of my mind, even though your words are totally different, I'm feeling the theme of Big Time. How lovely the words, how beautiful it is, so pleased I thought of it, but it is all your talents, but Long Live Peter Gabriel and Armin. Of course we never know, but he seemed so gracious at the 2014 Rock Induction and his music speaks volumes - Like Yours!!! Wow, just keep it up! Thank you. *change sweat to sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

armin

9 Years Ago

I performed this song at college christmas party with my band and it worked out really well. So the .. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

No - not me, your talent. Remember, there was already a theme, I just know a lot of bands. Could n.. read more



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I am going awat from my "sweat" please don't mind looks to me should be "sweet". Wording is impressive and heart touching. Thanks pal

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sadashivan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks the sentence is gracious
armin

9 Years Ago

yep ..........
armin

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This song is meant for much younger people than I...I was wondering which instrument do you play or do you just sing? Good luck in your future asperations. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

can play guitar but singing and composing are my best talents. Its been only about a month I started.. read more
Like the fluent rhythm in the poem. It's also a great dream, big aspirations. I hope you will succeed. Very well done. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks rudi, for your nice comment.
This is one of the first times I've ever read a song without hearing it first and it's a cool experience. Lyrically sound!

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Ian ,I appreciate that.
Yeah, you are making it big even now! Sometimes we make it big figuratively in life; everyone has got too have that chance you know, it's just a part of life and we wouldn't try to do it, if looking back from how far we've come it didn't feel great or not, if there was no effort it wouldn't be worth the trying they say, I have to believe it, it makes sense from what I can tell by this time in life

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is fantastic! Great job:) I love this piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit cool girl.
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
sounds like sweet music to me, an inspired lyric my friend, well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it.
A great tongue in cheek satire armin
A commentary on the fame craze sweeping the world
"In the future, everyone will be world-famous for 15 minutes" warhol

nice lyric-ing

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Anto.
I recommend another pass for corrections in spelling and word usage.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

spellings really, Ok Mom I'll double check that. And ya happy new year.

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Added on December 17, 2014
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Tags: Big, Bigger, Large, Mars, Dreams

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