I'll make it Big

A lyrics defining my dreams and my aspirations.

Opening. .....

I am going away,
away from my sweet little home.
To a big world,
taking some rich dreams in my eyes.
The place is full of lights,
the place is paradise.
Skyscraper buildings,
kissing the great heights.

Verse1.....

I am driving down,
to the finish line of my success.
Hardwork is premium gear,
and fuel is my sweat.
I'll be there,
be there for sure.
I don't fear of the storms,
don't really care if I fall
i am gonna bounce back.

I'll look like moon,
shine like a star.
Spend weekdays in heaven,
and weekends in mars.

Yes,
I'll make it big,
apply countless efforts.
I'll live my dreams,
own a big name and treasures.

Chorus .....
I'll make it big,
bigger and large.
Keep chasing my dreams,
till my heartbeat is last.

verse2....
Honoured by Grammys,
an Oscar award.
I'll be living every second,
like a superstar.
Wake up at seven,
from a wide round bed.
Much work in studios,
yeah am a strong man.

Big line up performances,
people shout and cheer.
Tired writing autographs,
rest in a golden chamber.

Yes,
I'll make it big,
make it for sure.
Rolling in fame,
I'll open the door
to success.

Chorus. .....
I'll make it big,
bigger and large.
Keep chasing my dreams,
till heartbeat is last.

Like from slum to a heaven,
I'll make it big.
From dull to diamond,
I'll make it big.
From dark to a lighten hope,
I'll make it big.
And from down to the top,
I'll make it big.

Big Big Big,
Bigger and large.
So big big big,
MUCH BIGGER AND LARGE. ......................................

Author's Note

Its inspired by Peter Gabriel song 'Big time'. Thanks Dale for reminding of the song, it was a great inspiration.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Oh my goodness Armin, I am reading and loving it and thinking wow, how great and in the back of my mind, even though your words are totally different, I'm feeling the theme of Big Time. How lovely the words, how beautiful it is, so pleased I thought of it, but it is all your talents, but Long Live Peter Gabriel and Armin. Of course we never know, but he seemed so gracious at the 2014 Rock Induction and his music speaks volumes - Like Yours!!! Wow, just keep it up! Thank you. *change sweat to sweet.

[armin]

I performed this song at college christmas party with my band and it worked out really well. So the credit goes to you for giving such a nice inspiration, 'big time' great song. Because of you I could write something like that. Thanks.

[Confuser]

No - not me, your talent. Remember, there was already a theme, I just know a lot of bands. Could never write a song. Listen to more Peter Gabriel, like In your Eyes. I'm so glad it went well! Wow!

[rashu]

amazingly beautiful..
i would like to listen this as a song..
keep it up ..
u r really talented..
keep it up..

[armin]

Thankyou so much that means a lot.

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

You will make it big. Believe it and live it! Dreams fuel the wings of creativity.

Wishing you success!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[armin]

Thankyou Carol,
I also wish you a great success in journey of life, have a great time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i don't think many realize just how tough and iffy the life of a musician is...how much hard work is put in...
i think many just imagine, natural talent coming to fruition in an instant...and boom, there is music and fame.

i like how you depicted the struggle.

[armin]

Jacob you are right there always a course of hardwork and struggle when you desire to achieve big.
Thanks.

[Roshan Nair]

Man this can be an amazing rap or a song if you put a tune to it! the angst is palpable ! great job !

[armin]

No rap will not be fit according to the wordings of lyrics. Thanks for your visit, I appreciate that.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the energy and the drive in the words.
"Big Big Big,
Bigger and large.
So big big big,
MUCH BIGGER AND LARGE. ."
You made your point. Good to have great dreams and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

Thankyou John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MsJewel]

I would love to hear this set to music.
You are quite talented.
Keep writing!

:) Julie

[armin]

Thanks Julie for your kind words.

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[Jimmy Yetts]

This song came across as a parody--a poetic account of primary goals not to have.
Whatever your true intentions, armin, the piece is skillfully crafted and delivers its message quite effectively.

[armin]

Parody I don't think it's a right word, you must have read the authors note it's an inspiration from Big time. Thanks for your kind thoughts.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Am very careful about my choice of words, armin. Note, please, the phrase "came across" which, of course, means how it seemed to me. Also, the goals set in the song (again, as far as I'm concerned) are unworthy of being the most fervent desires of a true musician. Mere success is all that's expressed; musical excellence, never mentioned.
And so--as I wrote, "...a parody--a poetic account of primary goals NOT to have."
I am aware you did not write, or intend, a parody.

[Emily]

I like how you stated off the song!
I love the chorus!
Keep it up!

[armin]

Thanks Emily, have a nice time.

[wordman]

well I can already see this one on the charts

[armin]

thank you soooo much ron .

[wordman]

your welcome

[prince digbani]

keep up with the chase because your going to get there soon. keep doing what you know how to do best with your talent cuz it is what you need to achieve your already painted dream. Thanks for the share.

[armin]

Thanks prince you are very kind. Thanks for your good wishes, God bless you.

[armin]

yep ........

[prince digbani]

Your welcome