Love story

A story of a boy and his eternal love.

Once upon a time,
there was a boy.
His name was armin,
not rich as king.
He was leading a lonely life,
no happiness no joy.
He worked in a palace,
handling a Troy.

He used to measure treasure weights,
was faithful to his duty.
Music was his passion,
and was a big foodie.
And after some days,
he fell in love.
Girl of his dreams,
princess of the same kingdom.

She was made of Gold,
had beauty and fame.
Strong as titanium,
Taylor was her name.
Now overcoming his fear,
armin ran towards her.
Breaking his silence,
said 'I love you' my dear.

She kept standing still,
and was surprised listening to that.
But she offered him a deal,
you have to impress my dad.
you'll have to stand on his behalf,
fight like a warrior.
Have to win a war,
then you'll be my dearer.

Armin commanded in loud,
my love is truly abound.
Am all ready to give my best,
my love is muchly blessed.
Playing on my life,
I'll defeat every opponent.
Will strive till I last,
making you all important.

The sun has risen in its own glory,
birds were flying so blissfully.
Armin was about to take on the battlefield,
and God was blessing his victory.
He fought bravely like Tiger,
leading the army.
Winning at the end,
he praised his destiny.

He shouted joyfully,
celebrating his great victory.
'Armin armin' all around,
he really created a history.
This was a happy end,
Armin got his fairy.
Taylor found her charming prince,
this was simply my 'Love Story'.

Author's Note

Please tell me this one. This is really close to my heart.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description.
"The sun has risen in its own glory,
birds were flying so blissfully.
Armin was about to take on the battlefield,
and God was blessing his victory.
He fought bravely like Tiger,
leading the army.
Winning at the end,
he praised his destiny. "
The above lines could stand alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

Oh ,you are so kind sir. Thanks for your comment.

[armin]

I really appreciate you coming to read this one. That was a small dedication to taylor swift.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

this is a great write,i love short stories

[armin]

That was for my girl, taylor swift. Thanks man for your read.

[wordman]

i read this one because i wrote love story and a lot of poets here have written love story

[armin]

good. ..... do check out more of writings. I'll love that.
Thanks.

[armin]

good. ...... do check out more of my writings. I'll love that. Thanks.

[Confuser]

Armin, you have made me smile and laugh with this one....and a foodie too. My dog almost laughed at my laughter, seriously. It was so sweet and funny. Thank you so much silly young man. Made my day.

[armin]

glad I made your day. Thanks

[Confuser]

Young man, you are delightful. Keep writing! Wonderful.

[The Black Warrior]

OH MY GOD Armin, this is soooo good!

HA! I love it. it is so romantic you truly did a great job!

100/100 from me ;)

[armin]

Thanks suk.

[The Black Warrior]

You're welcome!

[Alex Boyd]

I like the imagery and also the well thought process it took to write this piece. Good work

[armin]

Thanks Alex, anything for taylor.

[Realm of Thoughts]

Nicely done... SO many things that we do in love. wow... Love always. Good write bro. Glad to read it...

[armin]

Thanks dude, I appreciate that.

[Matching Socks]

Very nicely done. :)
A sweet tale with a happy ending.

[armin]

Thanks Ana.

[Basu Gupta]

Taylor Swift..her debut song love story..
I too admire her for her beauty and because of her talent..
The only thing common between ..is we both wrote our first love song at the age of 18 though her's an international hit..
Nice write brodaa..keep writing
n thanks for sharing

[armin]

No friend, her debut song was 'Tim mcGraw'. And she started writing much earlier than her 18. Thanks for your comments.

[stars are far]

that was very well done, and it did express yourself, since its having your name and I guess a stage of your life, and each one of us have his own "love story", i expressed mine in a story, and yours was in a beautiful poem that have the parts that made you a happy person, well done my friend, keep that work coming :)

[armin]

Thanks for your review. Have a nice time.