Infinite Love

The Poem tells the story of a disturbed relationship, where guy waiting for his girl to apologize as he want to make the things right.

Staring at the door,
will it be knocked.
someone am waiting for,
my eyes are soaked.
Am wrapping hands aroud neck,
throwing my tired head back.
Am feeling little asleep,
just serve me my bed.

Am trying to take sleep,
but fails every time.
Deep in your thoughts,
and memories of your smile.
I try close my eyes,
see vision of your face.
You aren't here yet,
my heart beating in pace.

I leave the bed,
start looking at the walls.
Find you everywhere,
now missing your calls.
I can feel drought in rain,
your absence killing me.
To apologize for past,
I can stand on my knee.

I can be your romeo,
just be my Juliet.
Under clouds of love,
our hearts will get wet.
Come here for once,
we'll make new start.
I wanna die in your arms,
my infinite love will last.

Author's Note

What you think of these touching words.

Reviews

[blackcayne]

This is really sweet, probably what love feels like too.
When a loved one dies, you wish that they would take you with them.
Basically every love song but i like the way you wrote/phrased it.

[armin]

Thanks dear. Keep in touch. Have a cool time.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a tenderness.. a beauty of love awakening.. of the wanting.. the love that lasts for all time.. Beautifully done...

[Angad Waraich]

Aaha first and last love eh mate!
I like how you gave little references to her songs, well written

Well done
Welcome to WC.
Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

[armin]

You are welcome. But her songs is quite different to this. But also quite common at one point that is break up.

[Angad Waraich]

Precisely why i said "little references" !

[armin]

offcourse. Have a nice sleep.

[Arshia]

You've articulated your feelings really beautifully! Well written :)

[armin]

Thanks so much. Have a nice time.

[JCWilliams]

I think you capture how waiting for someone you love feels like hours when it has only been minutes. Also how your thoughts are consumed by them. Cool job!

[armin]

ya I described about a guy waiting for his girlfriend in a bad relationshp circumstances to apologize for his mistakes. Do you read I dedicated the poem to Taylor swift coz I really love her and her music.

[M.A.Rathore]

This is really a moving poem that shows the restlessness of hreat who feels discontent in the absence of beloved. Again and again watching and waiting to come someone whom you love much more than yourself that you ready even to die for her absence..
The poem has simplicity of words and depthness of heart. It make me remind Rosalind saying to her cousin that "Nobody had ever been died for love." AS YOU LIKE IT by Shakespeare.
Keep writing Armin..
Have a great day!
Please do review some of my poems...and provide Rating...

[armin]

Thank, always appreciate your visit.