Infinite Love

The Poem tells the story of a disturbed relationship, where guy waiting for his girl to apologize as he want to make the things right.

Staring at the door,
will it be knocked.
someone am waiting for,
my eyes are soaked.
Am wrapping hands aroud neck,
throwing my tired head back.
Am feeling little asleep,
just serve me my bed.

Am trying to take sleep,
but fails every time.
Deep in your thoughts,
and memories of your smile.
I try close my eyes,
see vision of your face.
You aren't here yet,
my heart beating in pace.

I leave the bed,
start looking at the walls.
Find you everywhere,
now missing your calls.
I can feel drought in rain,
your absence killing me.
To apologize for past,
I can stand on my knee.

I can be your romeo,
just be my Juliet.
Under clouds of love,
our hearts will get wet.
Come here for once,
we'll make new start.
I wanna die in your arms,
my infinite love will last.

Author's Note

What you think of these touching words.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A powerful piece that subsides within context and feeling, well done.

[armin]

Thankyou Thomas. :)

[wordman]

and the last line was the kicker,i liked it

[armin]

Thankyou Ron much appreciated.

[R Smith]

a real heart rending poem Armin, such powerful lines of sadness tell us how much she is loved but how lonely you are without her, great work my friend :)

[armin]

Thankyou so much.

[Elie Marie]

I like to believe in second chances. But too many people take the easy way out.
Your words were very touching, your poem is good. It could maybe flow a bit better... but that could just be me.

[Ryan Henderson]

I like this poem, you did a very good job of setting the mood for the poem, I like the imagery that I got from reading this! I agree with Coyote Poetry, second chances are rare, perhaps a little too so? Very good work, keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us learn the hard way. We have lost a special person.
"Come here for once,
we'll make new start. "
Second chances are rare. Sometime some things cannot be forgiven. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I could feel the need and the regret.
Coyote

[armin]

Oh, thanks for your reviews.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

The emotions really pour out in this one amrin.
Waiting for a love to heal, forgive...
It can be very consuming.
Well done.

[armin]

Thanxx... Ana.

[Tse]

A poem which shows the sanctity of ur love n courage to apologize for the mistakes that U've done! Truely felt from the core of ur heart n nicely penned! Great job! A few corrections though...
"Am wrapping hands aroud neck " - I am sure u meant around
"Start looking the walls" - jus add 'at' (start looking at the walls)
Dats all n ur poem is great! Keep up the good work!

[armin]

Thanks Tse, ya i think I forgot adding 'at' to make it more appropriate. Thanks for blowing love to my poem.

[Tse]

You're welcome :)

[cinel]

This is beautiful, intresting, i love it, good job.

[armin]

Thanks cinel.

[cinel]

You are welcome

[The Black Warrior]

This is beautiful... This is very elegant and emotional.

My fav. line > This made me go "awww" made me think of my parents love somehow LOL
I wanna die in your arms,
my infinite love will last.

This is beautifully done.Thank you for sharing

~Suk

[armin]

You are welcome anytime. Thanks for the words.