Infinite Love

The Poem tells the story of a disturbed relationship, where guy waiting for his girl to apologize as he want to make the things right.

Staring at the door,
will it be knocked.
someone am waiting for,
my eyes are soaked.
Am wrapping hands aroud neck,
throwing my tired head back.
Am feeling little asleep,
just serve me my bed.

Am trying to take sleep,
but fails every time.
Deep in your thoughts,
and memories of your smile.
I try close my eyes,
see vision of your face.
You aren't here yet,
my heart beating in pace.

I leave the bed,
start looking at the walls.
Find you everywhere,
now missing your calls.
I can feel drought in rain,
your absence killing me.
To apologize for past,
I can stand on my knee.

I can be your romeo,
just be my Juliet.
Under clouds of love,
our hearts will get wet.
Come here for once,
we'll make new start.
I wanna die in your arms,
my infinite love will last.

Author's Note

What you think of these touching words.

Reviews

[...]

Your words are a beautiful melodic longing for love. Enjoyed my visit

[armin]

Thanks again lynn for a cool visit.

[MsJewel]

I can feel the longing in your words. Your poem is bittersweet and beautiful..such a gentle flow..

:) Julie

[armin]

Thankyou for reviewing Julie.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

love a la Romeo and Julia, very well written :) Rudi

[armin]

Thankyou so much.

[jo]

They are very beautiful and sad very touching.
Jo

[armin]

Thankyou dear:)

[jo]

You welcome

[Valentine]

Love is a two way street, it takes two to make it work. Valentine

[armin]

yep, thankyou.

[Chris]

relationships take two not one... and some things can be forgiven and yet never forgotten. And apologies often go BOTH ways...

[armin]

indeed, thankyou.

[~]

I liked your imagery of hearts getting wet - tears of joy? tears of laughter? it is for the couple do decide.

[armin]

Thankyou. ...

[Roshan Nair]

Beautiful last verse especially, the whole piece very vividly paints the tension in the boys mind regarding his state brought upon by his love.
Nice work !

[armin]

Thankyou so much for reading and reviewing.

[stars are far]

omg that was so heartfelt and affectionate, it was so sweet yet heartbreaking.
we all have that one person who breaks us and makes s that weak, some of us might wait all day for 1 text messgae that they are sure will never get, they go to bed holding their phones and fall asleep waiting for a ring. We seem to be desprate sometimes, but we can be sure that we will move on
that was a very beautiful story.

[armin]

Thankyou so much for your kind words Suhad, very much appreciated.

[stars are far]

Always my pleasure Armin

[Jamestown]

Well done, I agree with wordman the last line says it all,thanks for sharing.

[armin]

Thanks for your lovely visit. .