Rain

This poem is dedicated to rain and defines how rain is important part of our life.

As leaves make trees wonders,
rain makes our lives wonderful.
As rainbow makes seven colours,
raindrops paint our heart colourful.
Cold raindrops on these hands,
falling from burst of clouds.
Telling to make fun and dance,
on rhythm of thunderclap sounds.
All are one under sky,
that water is our dignity.
With snacks and that cherrypie,
can't stop grooving like infinity.
Because. ......
As breadth gives human life,
rain makes our soul living.
As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling.

Author's Note

Having fun with raindrops.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Poems about the rain are too few.. and yet, except in times of extreme flooding, it's a true gift and beautiful.

The smell of the soil after rain is blissful, the feel of it on the skin more so.. and you've so well expressed that in your first post in the Cafe. Well done!

[Lavender Soya]

Hey there Spidey,

I was going over your work and found this. I hope it's yet too late to tell you that this one's well-phrased. And I enjoyed the symbolism and the touching personifications. They make me remember those times I played in the rain. I guess we will always be a kid inside. Every drop seems amusing and each pour is fascinating. Have a nice day! See you around.

Kind regards,
Lavender Soya

[armin]

Thankyou so much my friend, by the way lavender is it your real name.

[Lavender Soya]

Hey, No. That's just my pen name. But I'm considering to put my real name on my profile page. :-)

[Emily]

Love your wording!
Keep it up!

[armin]

Thanks Emily.

[stars are far]

thats so beautiful work and this is very true, rain is one of the most beautiful things, but not when you are at school going home :P walking , like 20 minuits then 40 minuits in bus haha anyways nah its great because we are home hehe. but also the risk is wonderful like walking with your besties wow, crazy thing, memories will always be remembered
once it was raining heavily i was walking into my universtiy lots of people are gazing at the intrance door, i was walking with full confidence when my umbrella broke and i had to run after it, and some of them started laughing i was going to laugh but then decided to follow my umbrealla hahah..
just a small story hehe,
that was nice poem ,:)

[armin]

Thanks suhad, I appreciate that.

[Aprille]

I love rain so much and I got hungry with the word cherrypie. :)) Beautiful poem, i like the imagery, thanks for sharing it to us.

[armin]

Thanks for your read olive, have a great day.

[Aprille]

You're welcome. :)

[wordman]

sunshine and rain we can`t do without either i liked your picture of rain

[armin]

I appreciate that ,ron.

[wordman]

you are welcome my friend

[Confuser]

Oh my how wonderful Armin. I loved it so. The message is beautiful and I found myself inside of every word. I do so love the rain, walking in it is so wonderful. Such a blessing and such a beautiful writing. You captured me with the first line...As leaves make tree wonders, rain makes life wonderful. How beautiful and the repetition of words, clever, and you go and weave this beautiful story. Thank you so much.

[armin]

Thank Dale, am honoured to get review like this. You are really a true soul.

[Confuser]

It is great. Thank you for the compliment. You are the nice young man. I thank you.

[Confuser]

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[armin]

you are welcome, you deserve every complement.

[Confuser]

Such a respectful young man. Your parents are proud of you I'm sure. You must believe me, you are an excellent writer.

[armin]

Huge complements and much love from your side. Am overwhelmed now. I want to be a big name in music industry as a singer and songwriter. So I really like when people appreciate my songs and my writing. Thanks again.

[Confuser]

Thought immediately of Peter Gabriel's song "Big Time." I'm on my way, I'm making it - Big time. If you don't know it, I urge you to listen. You've to know it!!!

[armin]

Really a random thought but I am sure there must a good in that. I'll download the song. Thanks.

[Confuser]

Only if it is free! Look at the younger Peter Gabriel - you'll see the video. It's great too. He was just inducted into Rock N Roll Hall of Fame this year. Brought famous African singer and lots drums with his performance. They wait until performers get older - but it was still quite beautiful. Love, love music - all kinds.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Enjoyed it ..u gave it a'' fun attire ' 'something that made me smile n i liked especially this part
"As breadth gives human life,
rain makes our soul living.
As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling." well done !

[armin]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Moonie]

A fun little poem. I like the word choice. My favourite lines would be
"With snacks and that cherrypie, 
can't stop grooving like infinity. "
Rain cleanses everything, it rejuvenates our spirits and ......playing with paper boats is fun.. hahaha.

[armin]

Thanks dear.

[MusicManiac]

Hello there!

I, while not a huge fan of rain, can appreciate the beauty of it that you're describing in this piece. You mention the idea of playing in the rain and I think that right there is the most wonderful part of it--rain brings out the innocence inside of us. Whenever it rains, I say that the sky is crying--and who it is crying for will remain a mystery--but your last two lines really reminded me of that.

Thank you for sharing this poem, I enjoyed reading it!

~MusicManiac

[armin]

Thanks for your read and review dear.

[MusicManiac]

You're welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Needed rain is a blessing and can be very dangerous. I liked how you described the rain.
"As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

You are welcome sir. And Thanks again for much love.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. It was my pleasure.