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thunderstorms of childhood

lightening ripple of God

rain over tears

 

and life was

dreaming

Reviews

[a]

To understand this poem or not depends on the reader's life background and perception, i believe. I love this piece, it has a powerful insight, it's concetrated as a beam, pure and expressive. the second stanza makes the idea not so clear, but together with the first one - it makes perfect harmony.
thank you!

[Bella Luna]

Don't they understand, those people below me! They are over analyzing things! Just read and enjoy, don't cut his words into a million pieces just to scatter them commendable! Jee whiz.

I'm not sure about this... It doesn't seem to make sense, but I suppose that if it were a lot longer then it would be fine.