Oh fallen one !

Oh fallen one !

A Poem by arlery

Stand up, oh fallen one.

You will have strength to bear,

The pain of effort,

Because life’s not always fair,

Inspiration, yes inspiration,

Comes, but with a price,

You must adhere with,

It, and look past all the lies,

But, remember, oh fallen one,

You once stood a long,

With every piece inside you,

Intact, when you were very strong,

Find that man in you, again,

We’ll beseech every side,

And peace will be restored with,

Amended, now that pride,

Come with me, oh fallen one,

The journey won’t be brisk,

But once the lingering illness fades,

The path won’t be a risk,

We’ll journey, past it all,

And you’ll overcome the fall,

For so will end the tale of how

We, conquered at last,

For so will the end the tale of how

We, overcame the past.

 

© 2011 arlery


Author's Note

arlery
Finally back with a new piece =)

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Fantastic write Arlery! This is a wonderful piece... there is much strength in this write. Enjoyed it much! thanks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE this writing!!!!
You did such a great job!
Thank you for sharing such a moving piece...

~A Fallen Herione~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! This is a really powerful write Arlery! Comes to me at a time when I was tempted to give up on something. After reading this, I am encouraged to press on which is what I know I should do anyway. excellent positive poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good to have you back! This is so powerful.. so inspirational... to stand and walk on after being knocked down.. pressed in on all sides. Your words give a certain courage to move on.. and this man you speak of knows he doesn't walk alone. That in itself is a living hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is great i love it an isnpiring message you give in this poem !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this, it's so insparational and the flow is amazing and the imagery is great. I can really relate. I just love it. amazing job (: Favorited!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece,
Wonderful flow, and inspirational

Posted 13 Years Ago



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