I keep looking

This is my first try; I normally don't write like this but I decided to experiment a bit. Give me your honest opinion.

I look through the glass everyday,

through the broken shards...

I look as the day eventually fades

and nightfall cascades,

I look as the birds circle and fly away

I keep looking.

I look through the glass everyday,

till those who care have no more to say.

I look as winter envelopes the roads,

as summer bades goodbye,

and dark turns the sky,

I keep looking.

I look through the glass everyday,

as those who arrive, return in dismay.

I look as the leaves fall,

as trees shed their tears,

I look as dear autumn is finally here,

I keep looking.

I look through the glass everyday,

as the nightfall creatures come out to play

I look as they come out of habitats,

I look as they wiggle and dance in the rays.

I look as the heat finally arrives,

as summer returns, I keep looking

I keep looking.

Reviews

[Gone]

Bravo!! Bravo!! I like the gentle way you express the emotions and the way you have framed each stanza. good write.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I like this, gives off some really strong imagery. Good job, I loved it~