Peace

A two line story.

Once upon a time, there was something called peace in the Earth. And then humans were created.

The end.

 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

peace has never been on the earth, i think peace is within us all,its our own paradise or peace we have in our individual souls minds hearts and spirits. I like your simple short poem though it is thought provoking and people can respond with their own interpretation of peace.Peace is from within not on exterior. but i also agree that yes humans can create mayhem and have

[The ArK]

Thank you for the comment!

[Nathan Spark]

now that is tight! bam. great!

[The ArK]

Thanks for the comment :-)

[Weeping willow]

HA!HA!HA! funny write,but true we are our own worst enemy ;-]

[barleygirl]

I agree with your point. I enjoy your sarcastic humor. This is a clear shorthand way of making your point. But I wish you could’ve included some details to SHOW instead of tell why you say this. We can’t always assume that our audience can fill in the blanks. That’s our job as writers (just my opinion) . . . *smile* Fondly, Margie

[The ArK]

I agree with you. As I mentioned in the description, this is supposed to be a 'two-line' story. It would've been better if I made this as a meme. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. Men are just chaos and confusion. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The ArK]

Thank you for the comment :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Pooja Chintamani]

Great !you summarized well;less words in a beautiful veil.

[Wild Rose]

someone discovered bombs - The END