Peace

A two line story.

Once upon a time, there was something called peace in the Earth. And then humans were created.

The end.

 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

peace has never been on the earth, i think peace is within us all,its our own paradise or peace we have in our individual souls minds hearts and spirits. I like your simple short poem though it is thought provoking and people can respond with their own interpretation of peace.Peace is from within not on exterior. but i also agree that yes humans can create mayhem and have

[The ArK]

Thank you for the comment!

[Thepensiveplayer]

Given all the conflicts of history within our society, peace means a lot of different things to different people. Yet, I'd say we shouldn't throw in the towel no matter what people have to go through in life. Peace can be achieved with the right mindset. Excellent poem my friend.

[Jade]

Oh WOW!!! Totally love this & IT IS so TRUE!!!.......LOL😁😁

[Najam Us Saher]

Haha. Love the ironic tone. Very clever story.

[Mrudula Rani]

Once upon a time there was peace on earth .
Then people found religion,
and destroyed peace in the name of God .

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmmm- well I wonder about this many times-God told Noah to build an ark said He was destroying everything because of how things had become- only 8 people were on the ark with animals- then created rainbow as promise not to destroy everything again- but then he allowed it all to happen again but He must have known humans would just mess it up again and it would return to like it was before and than those of us who try live good clean righteous must suffer inamongst all this...ill never understand- great words🌹

[Richard McLin]

Damn that's bleak. Great piece.
-Richard

[The ArK]

Thanks for the comment! :-)

[Leslie Philibert]

Clever write...and true ! Well done

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Mmm.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏!!!
I'm blown away😊 Splendid work!

[The ArK]

Thank you!

[Ms Paragon]

So much said in just a few words!Well done!