Mom, I can never thank you enough.

Mother's day special.

Mom, I can never thank you enough

It all started with a pain- my life.

I stepped into the world by hurting you mom,

by giving you the pain that gave you satisfaction.

The pain you'll always love to remember.

But I hurt you mom, even in the ultimate innocence-

I gave you pain.

I can never thank you enough for that, mom.

You carried me, a long 10 months...

10 months of transformation to chaos to a human.

You kept me inside, served me with love and care.

You let me grow up comfortably.

My extra weight did not matter to you.

I can never carry you even a single day-

even if I were the most strongest man in the world.

I can never thank you enough mom.

And when I slowly stepped into my life-

you received me with a handful of love.

You gave me the nectar of life.

You gave me the sweet taste of love.

You loved me, cared me, taught me the essentials of life.

You showed me the importance of being honest,

You taught me to say truth always,

The importance of trust in life.

You showed me how to respect others,

not only humans but also the nature.

You taught me that the god lives in the-

hearts of everyone.

You made my nights colourful with the-

stories of the villain fox and poor rabbit.

I can never thank you enough

for the support you gave me mom.

As I went far in my life,

I forgot what you taught.

As my height increased, voice toughened,

my ears became more resistive to your voice.

But you always smiled at me.

Your voice never hardened even if mine did so.

I hurt you more than I did at the beginning.

I made scars on your mind and soul-

with the key of innocence no longer in my hands.

I know mom, a sorry won't be enough.

But I know, being a mother you can-

forgive even without a sorry.

I can never thank you enough for giving me

the eternal love that I failed to return back.

I can never thank you enough for

bringing me into this world,

for giving me this extraordinary life.

I love you mom....

Reviews

[Utkarsh Singh]

well ARK you decribed the 3 stages of our life very well ...if god really exists then he is in the form of our mother ......
the starting of the last para of your poem touched me the most .....it is the truth and the reality of what is going on in this world now a days as we grow up ....like it very much ....gud one brother

[The ArK]

thanx utkarsh :)

[¿]

I always become elated after reading such tributes to moms!!
It blooms smile on my face.....😊
It's really a hearty poem.....thanks for writing this and you're mom's not only be proud but her pride will go higher because of your good causes!!

[The ArK]

Thanks for your kind words! There is no greater honor than the blessings one get from his mother, I guess.

[¿]

Indeed!! You're welcome 😊

[Penny]

Very nyc poem. Though the structure is nt right. I mean the part before birth is actually described in second stanza whereas the poem should have started from there. Rest everything is perfect about this piece.

[Mirra]

Of all beauty, she bestow the most
She is the fluffy pillow,
She is the angel of our nights and days.
She is mother.

From the day she started to bear us in her womb to the present, countless things she taught and unconditional love she gave we really can't thank her enough. Thank you for sharing this, very well-penned Ark.

[Saddam]

Mom, I can never
thank you enough.....

Hamare dil se bas yahi nikalta hai....

[The ArK]

Tanx SSADD. But woh hindi dialogue mujhe samach nahi aaya. Sorry ;)

[just Penny]

A lovely tribute, rich in loving sentiments and very well written. I enjoyed this :) Penny

[The ArK]

Thank you Penny. :)

[Ayushi]

You have made a wonderful attempt to summarize the role of mother in our life..
This poem shows your true love and dedication towards your mom..

[The ArK]

Thank u Ayushi :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh what a sentimental poem, I love how you show all your respect to your mom, I always give my mom credit for all the good things that I am and miss her everyday. So when I see anyone express their unconditional love for their mom I get emotional.

[The ArK]

Thank you friend :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure sir.

[melissa]

This is really beautiful ark i really enjoy reading it a lot keep up the great work