Mind, Night and the Darkness

Human mind and the night are closely related. Both are dark at the end of a day.

Mind, Night and the Darkness

Human mind work so different

at night, in its deep dark shadow.

When there's no dazzling light,

no annoying sound, only calmness.

It all changes at night- the human mind,

covering its even more dark side

by the pure darkness of night.

Night is the time your eyes

doesn't search for a light.

You'll want it to be closed.

Closed against all the darkness around,

only to let out the darkness inside.

When left alone at night, things change.

Everyone finishes a day long show there,

without a prolonged applause.

Without the mask, he's he-

what really inside.

Night feared me once,

by the fairy tales of ghosts.

But now I love the night.

Because, It's the only time I can see me.

It's the only time that reveals-

fear, revenge, lust and all other things-

I failed to see in the daylight.

That's why it's so important.

The end of a day, or a beginning of new one.

Night has only one colour- Black.

And without the mask, human mind-

have the same one- Black.

That's why I'm in love with that colour.

That's why I love the darkness, night and my mind.

Author's Note

Looking forward to see your reviews.

Reviews

[Saddam]

But now I love the night.
Because, It's the only time I can see me.
It's the only time that reveals-
fear, revenge, lust and all other things-
I failed to see in the daylight.

Yes. Night remind us that we are the soul. It makes a space between me and myself. Great poetry.

[The ArK]

Thank u SSADD :)

[Prabhudas Sajeev]

"The day reveals our personality.But the night reveals our character.And that's the difference".
good poem :)

[Mirra]

I'm starting to think you're not from India, your English is really good like a native. I envy how you can pull out this amazing poem and you're 17! This is a WOW!

[The ArK]

Actually I'm not that good at English. Usually English has been my lowest scoring subject in my studies... :) And my grammar is poor.... :(

[Mirra]

Well I didn't see that here and I've read some of your works, they are strong and well-penned!

[The ArK]

Oh... Thank u :)

[Mirra]

Welcome :-D

[Penny]

Nyc write. Reminds me of my poem night. I am also very creative at night so I can relate to you, choice of words is good and you have covered all aspects but language needs a little work. Well done.

[Utkarsh Singh]

all evil ideas strikes my mind at mid night and this the the reason i love night .....btw an interesting poem

Night has only one colour- Black.
And without the mask, human mind-
have the same one- Black.
That's why I love that colour.

That's why I love the darkness, night and my mind.

deep thinking buddy .......loved it ...:D

[The ArK]

Thank you Buddy.

[Glass Heart Inc]

At night you are left only with your thoughts as you try to sleep in the darkness... It's a good poem I liked it.
Night feared me once,
by the fairy tales of ghosts.
But now I love the night.
Because, It's the only time I can see me.

I liked this stanza the most. Night is the only time you can see you, in the darkness

Well done great poem :)