Don't You Remember?

What happened to it being you and me?

You loving me and me loving you

Making it all feel so true

You were my Prince

and I was your Princess

Where did this feeling go?

It was supposed to be

me and you against the world

Don't you remember?

You promised

But I guess it was all just a lie

Like don't you remember?

it was supposed to be you and me

Sailing across the deep blue sea

to forget about every little thing

Don't you remember?

you were my Prince

and i was your Princess

What happened to us?

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

The way you cut the lines of each makes it break the pace of the poem. It's like. Adding unnecessary periods. In the middle of a single sentence.

[ak]

okay, thankyou for letting me know.