Rebecca

She is this new babe crying little flower abloom on the hill Oh be for we both worth trying oh be for my life this thrill

My wife Rebecca, light of my life!

She is the bright sun shining

melting on us butter and cream

Oh be our two hearts entwining

oh be for my hope this dream

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She is such the new babe crying

little flower abloom on the hill

Oh be for we both worth trying

oh be for my life this thrill

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She is the love without compare

beauty like a new born spring

Oh be of our eye's sweet stare

oh be for my love everything

Author's Note

The air is sweeter, the night is cooler. Life springs forth anew. Such is my life since meeting Rebecca. I remember thinking to myself, what does she see in me? I am prone to times when I am depressed. I wondered till recently how Becky would react in those dark days. Thankfully she is a dream come true. She took my hand, calmed the seas of doubt and led me to the light!
"God grant me this one extravagance. May she and I dance to this tune till the end of time"!!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Seems as if you could write a hundred books of your love for her, and it would only be the beginning.... Beautifully confessed and filled with that sense of sunshine summer days, even when when winter comes. You are blessed to have her in your life... and she is blessed to have you.

[Lily Mae]

The two of you are poetry in motion.. Thank you for sharing.xo

[Katie Lynn]

This is absolutely beautiful, Tate. You make it so obvious how you feel for her, and yet it seems your words will still never be deep enough by comparison. :) Stunning~

[EMF]

Simple, straightforward and heartfelt. A gentle, loving opening of the heart. They don't get better than this.

[Muse]

What a lovely tribute. You are blessed not only in love but with words my friend. :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

good poem~ comprehensive~ nicely traditional keep writing!~

[Elaenor Aisling]

Lovely poem. It is truly evident how much you care for her. You are a very lucky man, it sounds like. :)

[roarke]

it is a fortunate man indeed that is clear of mind and heart to realize the gift of love next to him.

[Chris]

Tate,

Well said... both poem and note.
Be sure you tell HER openly and often.

Take care,
Both of you.

Chris

[?]

Awww Tate, this is beautiful. We all I think often wonder what the other sees in us. And usually with true love they are seeing the same as what we see in them.
Such a wonderful piece here, sounds like a wonderful relationship, love you two have. Congrats, some never find that true happiness.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A lovely tribute to your loved one. Absolutel beautiful.