Rebecca

She is this new babe crying little flower abloom on the hill Oh be for we both worth trying oh be for my life this thrill

My wife Rebecca, light of my life!

She is the bright sun shining

melting on us butter and cream

Oh be our two hearts entwining

oh be for my hope this dream

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She is such the new babe crying

little flower abloom on the hill

Oh be for we both worth trying

oh be for my life this thrill

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She is the love without compare

beauty like a new born spring

Oh be of our eye's sweet stare

oh be for my love everything

Author's Note

The air is sweeter, the night is cooler. Life springs forth anew. Such is my life since meeting Rebecca. I remember thinking to myself, what does she see in me? I am prone to times when I am depressed. I wondered till recently how Becky would react in those dark days. Thankfully she is a dream come true. She took my hand, calmed the seas of doubt and led me to the light!
"God grant me this one extravagance. May she and I dance to this tune till the end of time"!!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Seems as if you could write a hundred books of your love for her, and it would only be the beginning.... Beautifully confessed and filled with that sense of sunshine summer days, even when when winter comes. You are blessed to have her in your life... and she is blessed to have you.

[Seashell]

your dream come true...wonderful
sometimes it takes a lifetime to fine your REAL true soul mate to share the rest of your life with on earth..looks like you found your pot of gold at the end of the rainbow now...time to change and move on to pastures new...mmmm smell that newly cut grass...heaven..

[brenda]

beautiful !!!:)

[Alskar]

The obvious deep affection comes across well in this poem. But the actual writing comes across as though you're attempting to make it sound fancy, but it doesn't make sense or just doesn't sound right. The first two lines are especially strange.

[∂αʌ<..]

yet another beautiful tribute Tate! a wonderful poem for such a wonderfully pretty lady!

[Sunni Davis]

Oh, this is so sweet, so lovely! I can just feel your love for her pouring out of every word. Its so beautiful to be a witness to such utter devotion and pure love.

[Hotwater]

Good work here mate, your heart on your sleeve.
*bird*

[Helpless]

sweet and gorgeous pic to go with a beautiful poem!

[Aidz]

Ahh sweet love......

Kewl scribe Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

Wonderful sentiment and expression as always. Powerful emotion and love pours through your words.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stunning, stunning, stunning.