Rebecca

She is this new babe crying little flower abloom on the hill Oh be for we both worth trying oh be for my life this thrill

My wife Rebecca, light of my life!

She is the bright sun shining

melting on us butter and cream

Oh be our two hearts entwining

oh be for my hope this dream

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She is such the new babe crying

little flower abloom on the hill

Oh be for we both worth trying

oh be for my life this thrill

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She is the love without compare

beauty like a new born spring

Oh be of our eye's sweet stare

oh be for my love everything

Author's Note

The air is sweeter, the night is cooler. Life springs forth anew. Such is my life since meeting Rebecca. I remember thinking to myself, what does she see in me? I am prone to times when I am depressed. I wondered till recently how Becky would react in those dark days. Thankfully she is a dream come true. She took my hand, calmed the seas of doubt and led me to the light!
"God grant me this one extravagance. May she and I dance to this tune till the end of time"!!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Seems as if you could write a hundred books of your love for her, and it would only be the beginning.... Beautifully confessed and filled with that sense of sunshine summer days, even when when winter comes. You are blessed to have her in your life... and she is blessed to have you.

[Jazique]

Awe that is so sweet and I felt so much emotions and this poem of how much she means to you and she truly seems like the sun in your life. As writings showed feelings, descriptions, repition, and most of all heart and soul. I loved the words of hearts entwining of hopes this be your dream. It was a strong and cute poems describing a person in a wonderful way just by what they'd done for you that no other could do. So wonderful job and I hope she loves this poem as much everyone else seems to do and may you both continue to walk the path of light with one another side by side filled with happiness as this poem. Well done and keep up the marvelous work.

[light and ashes]

You open up your heart for all to see how much you love her and how your love helps you to stand tall. Gorgeous poem.

[Richard Williams]

A lovely tribute to your love. Just the right words framed in just the right tone, it had to make her heart sing.

[S Sanders]

How romantically sweet:-)

[M.Babu]

"She is the love without compare
beauty like a new born spring
Oh be of our eye's sweet stare
oh be for my love everything"

This was such a fantastic tribute...the confession of true love rings out in the syllables and echoes to the depths of the readers hearts. Wonderfully phrased Tate my friend...I'm sure she appreciated every word!

~M.Babu~

[Periac]

beautiful tate...honest and true ...absolute truth

[Pradnya]

Wow!! such a beautiful gift somebody can give to someone in the form of poem, it is just so touching, thank u for sharing such a beautiful piece of your life. hey and i like james blunt thank u for sharing it too, the song just adds to your poem, keep sharing your work

[ShimmeringGlaze]

Aww... Tate that's so sweet.

[Droll Prole]

ah so romantic and sweet, another lovely poem.

[Judy Ponceby]

Awesome write :) Had to read it again Tate :)