What is Truth

True love seeks not itself to please for it fears no loss of station Creating ease, with every breeze Heaven grows to Hell's frustration

 

 

Becky and I 

False love seeks of itself to please

laughing at others pain and plight

Joys in the tease, the loss of ease

wreaking Hell of Heavens respite

 

True love seeks not itself to please

for itself it has not a care

Creating ease, with every breeze

Heaven grows within Hell's despair

 

Author's Note

It isn't so hard to understand the differences in love and usury.
One is selfish the other selfless.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. A powerful and beautiful description of the gifts of love.
"Laying my eye's on you at last
sweet beauty no way to measure
Wanting nothing more of us
than to give joy to the pleasure"
Last line is true wisdom. Love is giving all you can to make the love of a life content. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[realmwriter]

This is Frickin sublime. A work of utter beauty and grace from a quill so skillfull and fluent in the Language...

[Sakib]

This is awesome!!!! I really loved it. A complete poem. Heartwarming poem. I would like to add more adjectives here. Great job.

[brenda]

beautiful i wish i could give this poem to this friend of mine and to many others this is very beautiful i love your oem is so true !:)

[Judy Ponceby]

This is magnificent. And having just experienced the selflessness of love this last week, this truly speaks to me. Beautiful writing Tate. As always you lend your heart well to your words. And a fitting song as well. :)

[LadyNaida]

Well there is nothing more beautiful to come home to that kind of love. True love, unconditional love is tried by many trials and obstacles, if at the end they are still around than you know it was true love from the beginning.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful piece and I would expect nothing less :)

[Katie Lynn]

As I have said once before, you are such a romantic. :) But this is quite a beautiful poem, and it's very true. You are absolutely brilliant!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I totally agree that one is selfish and one is selfless, This poem is amazing in and of itself. It warmed my heart as I read, and touched my soul. thank you for the opportunity to read it. You are a gifted writer.

100/100