One Father to Another

Behind those eyes then rose a tear the first blood I had ever drew From the depths of his tiny soul where innocence bid me adieu

Son Tate

Each day my son with thoughtful eyes

looked up to me through his laughter

Knowing I would be kind and wise

from that time and ever after

 

 

Once bitten from pain of divorce

I had shed teardrops of my own

From depths my boy had drug me back

he had never left me alone

 

 

Then came the moment I had feared

when my temper did hurt my son

Deep like the pain from my divorce

left me to ask, "what have I done"

 

 

Behind those eyes there rose a tear

the first blood I had ever drew

From the depths of his tiny soul

where innocence bid me adieu

 

 

Fearing grief would hinder his sleep

and not knowing what I should say

I looked to find him in slumber

there beside our picture he lay

 

 

Asleep in pain his eyes had closed

I felt my heart begin to moan

A sole tear lie upon his cheek

where I left a few of my own

So now whenever I am asked

to bless him with my permission

I think on what I lost that day

when I forced on him submission

Author's Note

Whenever my son asks for my permission I always ask myself now, who will it hurt if I say yes? If the answer is only myself I always say yes. A lesson I learned the hard way. It seems I learn best that way. I should say the reference in this poem to blood being spilled was metaphoric, not literal. In this case I had just lost quite a bit in the divorce and was distraught. Little Tate just wanted my attention. When he started nagging me I turned on him and launched a tirade his way. The look on his face as a tear arose from his soul was heart wrenching. Having never seen me so upset he was devastated. The barb launched his way rebounded off his innocence to strike me dead center in my own heart. I had broken both our hearts. If ever an experience wrung the very water from my soul, this was it!

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

This is such a tender, yet profound piece... I FEEL each word.. I feel each tear.. I feel the anguish.. oh my goodness.. I literally have chills right now.. I feel the depth at which you love this precious blessing.. It is pure, it is unconditional, and it is real.. This is my absolute favorite piece I have had the pleasure of reading on this site... You are truly talented, my friend... AMAZING!!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Now see many would say this was the hardest thing to write and admit But i beg to differ While I cannot read it without shedding a tear And cannot read it aloud writing it was easy it simply poured on the page

[AprilRN1210]

well, it poured brilliantly.. Thank you for sharing this with me.. I absolutely love it.. LOVE it.. not only do you have a wonderful talent, it seems you have a beautiful soul.. :)

[Tate Morgan]

I love my children But Tate holds a special place in my heart he and he alone went through my divorce with me and he alone saved my soul

[AprilRN1210]

I can feel that love shine through every tear soaked word sir and it touched me deeply.. I know you speak the truth.. You are blessed to have one another.. and I am blessed to have been able to read this breathtaking expression of that love..

[Marie]

It is terrible when we hurt our children, often not meaning to...all any of us can do is learn from it....

[JohnnyMagrinho]

As you've been brutally honest about this, I'm going to just talk to you like a normal person here, like I'm not reviewing this, because this is more than a poem. It's an admission of your struggles of being not only a parent but a husband, too.

I have been something of a step-dad for the last 2 years to a little girl and while my relationship with her mother has always been rocky at best, I tried to not let it affect my time spent with the little one. Of course I have reacted awfully towards her and said and been things she never deserved of me. It's something I can't change no matter how much I regret.

We want what is best for our children and family but at times we can't give it to them. We are human, and seemingly all of us burdened with some baggage of our own to carry with us wherever we go.

Very strong message and it's brought back memories of my own. Thanks for your sincerity and honesty - that's why I created that competition because maybe part of the healing process is to get all this s**t out there. Get it off your back, you know.

Appreciate the read and the submission. Thank you.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This is beautiful and so vulnerable! Is there a worse pain than to see our children hurt? I would say, yes, it is when we have hurt them ourselves. Very touching.

[joshua deathdealer]

It is perfectly done and wow what a outstanding poem. It made me think of my daughter and the pain I've caused her due to my once overbearing depression. I just want to run to her and hold her in my arms.. Amazing in every way.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Tate, this is heartbreaking...a lesson well learned. To see the pain in your little boy's eyes at that moment, must have been life changing. Sometimes what breaks us makes us stronger. Thank you for sharing this.

[Stacey Watts]

Wow very powerful. A son's love is so amazing and you sound like you know what it means to open up and be a good father. This was beautiful and the lessons learned here will be what resonates forever. It is also good to share with others that they may learn as well. Great piece.

[Breann S.]

Usually, I believe, meaning is lost when the words are twisted to fit into a set rhyme scheme. But there was not a single point in this work where I felt the emotion and meaning were compromised because of it. Very beautifully written.

[AmandaN]

I don't know what to say. You draw such emotion from me and as a parent to a little boy myself I gain more understanding I think. Beautiful words,honest sentiment,powerfully written. I bow down to you. Truly awe inspiring, what a talent!

[Sahar moonlight]

Its really a poem of soul.
I was reading wishing it wouldnt end, as it holds all the senses of heart within.
It really touches and print a mark so deep.

[Pratik]

That was a moving poem. its splendid the way you have penned down your own life experiences to create such a beautiful piece... sometimes we take out our sadness on people we love but end up hurting ourselves...That is nicely captured by this piece... Thanks for the read :)