Youthful Vision

Old years like waves broke on the shore

a burnt sky felt both dark and gray

The winds had howled so cold and long

my soul was beaten night and day

 

I wonder if there was a time

when I could have turned right not left

And in so doing change my fate

thereby saving this heart bereft

 

But those are thoughts best left alone

to think on when there’s nothing more

As now we have the blue-sky smiles

bright summer,  red eves to adore

 

I find they are just our choices

that is which times we think upon

To live in pain from days gone by

or within the light there-upon

 

Our minds are what capture and keep

good and painful thoughts that abound

Should we choose to tolerate them

bad times will be our only sound

 

For me I choose the bright sunlight

spring times when I was but a child

The favored memories of days

when I ran torrid, fast and wild

 

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Author's Note

I decided long ago that when the winds blew me cold and long. I would simply look within myself. For memories of days when I was sleek, fast and strong.

Reviews

[ice]

My man Tate...

"I wonder if there was a time
when I could have turned right not left
And in so doing change my fate
there by saving this heart bereft"

There was a time, and you used it wisely, as the "road" decision is part of all of our histories..Frost knew what road was best for him, and so did you..

"I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference."

You are just "telling this with a sigh"..in this poem.
And I am glad to have read it.

The pen takes over for strong muscles, sometimes..and your pen is "sleek and strong"


Namaste
ice

[Sarah Marie]

Definitely something to think about. I loved it from the first line-it had me grinning in an instant; and such a lovely tone and the music added even more emotion that made it so much more enjoyable to read and think on

[Jazique]

"For me I choose the bright sunlight," how nice of memories of yesterday. Nice work.

[Jeff]

Those powerful what if questions. They seem to plague us all. But they are best left unanswered as what has happened yesterday, made us today.

[George Love]

ANother well penned poem. Clear ideas, nothing wasted.

[Fran Marie]

A beautful vision indeed to focus on, soo nicely expressed and wonderfully penned!!

[Dream Weaver]

Light and airy like a warm summer breeze!
Excellent ink Tate....

[Anatomical Grip]

this is so great. I love the message.

[Im His Daughter]

great poem tate very nice!

[Tommy]

Great message of seeking out hope within ourselves to overcome when hope in life seems to have diminished.

RLG,
Tommy

[HopelesslyDevoted]

freakin genius!